发布时间 : 星期五 文章2017-2018学年上海市浦东新区建平中学高三下学期9月开学考更新完毕开始阅读189bbd72bed126fff705cc1755270722192e5935
第II卷
V. Translation
Directions: Translate the following sentences into English, using the words given in the brackets. 72. 在公园里玩耍的孩子们让老人想起了他快乐的童年。(remind) 主要错误：1. 时态错误：大部分同学用一般现在时 2. 表达错误: 老人用the old/the elderly
3. 逐字翻译：让老人想起 误译作“make...remind of...”
参考答案：The children playing in the park reminded the old man of his happy childhood. 73. 他所递交的理由很有说服力，所以经理同意重新考虑他的提议。(persuasive) 主要错误：1. 时态混乱，前后不一致
2. 表达不当：递交用give, hand on, send等，重新考虑用consider about, think over again 3. 语法问题：manager前漏加the
参考答案：The reason(argument) he presented was so persuasive that the manager agreed to reconsider his proposal.
74. 只有在自然灾害发生的时候，你才会真正了解到大自然的威力。(Only) 主要错误：1. 时态错误：大部分同学用了一般过去时 2. 拼写错误: 自然灾害natural disaster
3. 用词不当：（自然灾害）发生用take place; (大自然的）威力用force/strength 参考答案：Only when natural disasters occur, will you really learn the power of nature. 75. 当地政府已经广而告之新的交规，这对城市形象和安全很有益处。(publicize) 主要错误：1. 时态错误：前半句用现在完成时，后半句用过去时
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2. 用词不当：交规用traffic laws, transportation rules, 形象用appearance, impression.
3. 词组搭配问题：有益处用be beneficial for, be good to, have benefits on
4. 句意理解有误：“这”指代什么没搞明白，都理解为交规 5. 主谓不一致问题严重
参考答案：The local government has widely publicized the new traffic regulations, which is beneficial to the image and security of the city.
VI. Guided Writing
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
在李华18岁生日即将到来之际，他父亲准备送他一份生日礼物，为此，他特意征求了李华的意见。假如你是李华，你会选择哪份礼物，阐述你选择这份礼物的原因。 1. Iphone7s 2. a trip to London
3. an experience as a volunteer
写作思路：
第一部分：背景介绍+选择
第二部分：做出该选择的原因，一般用列举法展开，也可以用到对比比较 第三部分：简单总结 范文： Dear father,
Thank you for preparing my birthday sift so carefully and offering me a chance to make my
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own choice. Among these options, I'd prefer a trip to London to others.
First of all, I'm really interested in Britain and longing to experience the authentic British culture for my whole life. The Big Ben, London Bridge and the amazing theme museum of Sherlock Holms-everything I learnt about London attract me so much. What's more, traveling in a foreign country helps me learn more about the world. I'm sure that my horizons will be expanded through this trip. Additionally, I'm a big fan of musical. As we all know, West Side of London is a holy place for all musical fans including me. I can't wait to watch my favorite musician Les Miserables in a real theatre! Just imagine how cool that will be!
In brief, a trip to London will benefit me more than an iPhone and an volunteering experience do. It means a lot to me and I'm looking forward to it. (175 words)
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