发布时间 : 星期六 文章江西省重点中学盟校2018届高三下学期第一次联考（英语）更新完毕开始阅读259c0959a55177232f60ddccda38376baf1fe0b6
第四部分 写作（共两节，满分35分）
第一节 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
英语课上,老师要求同桌同学相互修改作文。假设以下小作文为你同桌所写，请你对其进行修改。文中共有10处错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加,删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（^），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（\\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。 3．必须按答题要求做题 Dear Alice,
I am delighting to hear that you will come to my city for sightseeing. I am writing to tell you my willing to make arrangements to your tour.
As for accommodation, you have the option of either staying in my home and in a hotel, which I can reserve for you in advance if you like. Besides, I’d like to help you work out the travel schedule. By the way, could you do with me a favor and purchase a Coach purse whether it doesn’t bother you? With my mother’s birthday approach, I wish to present to her as a birthday gift.
Looking forward to meeting you soon. I hope you would have fun here. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 第二节 书面表达（共25分）
假定你是高三学生李华。去年你作为交换生去了美国新泽西州布莱尔中学（Blair Academy）游学。回国后给你的host family的小伙伴Bill写一封感谢信，要点如下：
1.写信的目的； 玩。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Bill,
____________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________ Yours
Li Hua
2.分享游学体会；
3.寄上答谢礼物并邀请他们一家来中国游
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英语参考答案
第I卷
第一部分： 听力
1～5 AABCA 6～10 BBCBC 11～15 ABCAB 16～20 CAACB 第二部分：阅读理解
第一节 21-23 ABD 24-27 ACDB 28-31 CADB 32-35 CDBC 第二节 36-40 ACGBD 第三部分： 第一节 完形填空
41-45 BCDAC 46-50 DABDA 51-55BDCBC
第II卷
第二节 语法填空
61.Interestingly 62.buying 63.has been made 64.twenties 65.informed 66.why 67. a 68.designed 69. to 70.where 第四部分： 第一节 短文改错 Dear Alice,
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Looking forward to meeting you soon. I hope you would have fun here. will
Yours sincerely,
LiHua 第二节 书面表达 One possible version: Dear Bill,
I am writing to express my sincere gratitude to your whole family for what you did for me when I was studying in Blair Academy as an exchange student last year. It was your kindness and consideration that made my stay in your country so enjoyable.
The beautiful scenery, well protected environment and kind local people impressed me so much. Not
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only did I learn a lot about your rich culture, but I practiced my spoken English. You know, the time when I stayed with you and your family left me so warm and deep an impression. What a meaningful and unforgettable experience!
By the way, have you received the silk scarf and tea? They are gifts for you and I hope you will like them. I am expecting your family’s visit to China!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
书面表达评分标准：
1、要点：1）写信的目的； 2）叙述游学的体会； 3)发出邀请。 2. 总体评分原则：要点+语言表述
1）原则上应按照考生所表达的要点数归档。如考生写出所有要点，语言表达好，可打该档最高分；如考生写出所有要点，但语言错误较多，可降一档（如错误太多，可取其降档后之低线）。 2）在同一档次内，根据语言错误的多少确定分值。
1-2个错误，取该档次分值的高线；3-4个错误，取该档次分值的中线； 5-6个错误，取该档次分值的低线；7-8个错误，降至下一档的高线； 9-10个错误，降至下一档的中线；10个以上降至下一档低线。 档次 得分 20-25 分数段 高线 中线 低线 高线 四 15-20 中线 低线 高线 三 10-15 中线 低线 高线 二 5-10 中线 低线 高线 一 1-5 0 中线 低线 各段分数 24-25 21-23 20-21 18-20 16-18 15-16 14-16 12-14 10-12 9-10 7-9 5-7 4-5 3-4 1-3 未能传达与本题相关的任何信息或抄阅读理解。 只能写出与所要求内容有关的一些单词,文不达意 语言错误很多，影响表达。 语言有一些错误，尚能达意。 语言有少量错误，行文基本连贯，表达基本清楚。 语言基本无误，行文连贯，表达清楚。 语言使用情况 五 注：在表达要点的句子中，如果考生写出主谓结构及关键信息，但主谓结构有严重语言错误， （如语态、时态、系表结构中无系动词、只写出情态动词而无主动词）可视为表达出半个要点。
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如果累计要点数出现带有半点的情况，可根据语言质量进行归档，
1-2个错误，将其归入上一档取其低线；3-4个错误，将其归入本档取其高线； 5-6个错误，将其归入本档取其中线；7-8个错误，将其归入本档取其低线； 9个以上错误，将其归入下一档取其高线。 3. 如书写和卷面较差，影响判卷，扣1-6分。 4. 词数不够或超出太多扣2分。
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