发布时间 : 星期六 文章专题18 书面表达-2017年中考英语考点总动员系列(解析版)更新完毕开始阅读31669397a7c30c22590102020740be1e640ecc40
being built.”以及复合句“I like taking a bus to school because it’s comfortable and safe.的使用，丰富了文章的内容，为文章增色不少。 考点：话题类作文。
【点睛】书面表达评分标准“最高档”要求为：“应用了较多的语法结构或词汇；语法结构或词汇方面有少许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。”从历年书面表达高分文章来看，每篇文章都有“亮”点，即在用词、造句或段落安排上都有独到之处。要想获得高分就应在“正确”表达的基础上写出自己的特色，写出自己的“亮”点。
课时作业☆能力提升 1. 临近毕业，学校要求每个初三学生写封信给各个家长，简要汇报三年来初中生活的收获与存在问题。假如你是Jim，请根据下表的内容提示，用英文做一个简短的汇报。
1.学到很多知识，提高了学习技能。 2.了解到许多名人及他们的事迹。（举1-2个例子，参考人名：Spud， Tan 收 获 Dun， Armstrong， Marie Curie， Audrey Hepburn...） 3.学会做人：在校与老师同学和睦相处，互相帮助；在家......；在上学途中，遵守交通规则，能......；遇到困难时，能...... 存在问题 学习压力（feel stressed in...）大，......（再举1-2个例子） 1.感谢…… 2.打算（怎样处理存在的问题） 目前想法 要 求： 1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； 2）必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，并适当发挥；
3）词数：100词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）； 4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
Dear Dad & Mum，
I will leave junior school and meet a new challenge of my life. Now I would like tell you what I have done in the past three years.
▲ ▲ ▲ ▲ ▲ ▲ ▲ ▲ ▲ Yours Sincerely Jim 【答案】
I will leave junior school and meet a new challenge of my life. Now I would like tell you what I have
learnt in the past three years.
I have learnt a lot of knowledge from the books and I have improved my study skills. I have learnt a lot of
famous people all over the world. Spud’s story tells us not to give up when we do anything. Tan Dun is a great musician. He said his music is to dream without boundaries. I can also get along with my teachers and classmates. We learn from each other and help each other， too. At home I can do some housework so that you can have more time to rest. On my way to school， I can obey the traffic rules./I can help old men cross the road. When I meet difficulty， I can talk to my friends/teachers/you about it.
Now I feel stressed in my study. I can’t get enough sleep/I have too much homework to do every day/I have no time for my hobbies.
I would thank you for taking good care of me and thank my teachers and friends for their help. I will plan my time well to study better and sleep well/ make my study and my body better. Yours Sincerely Jim
写作亮点：这篇是一篇优秀的范文，字数符合要求，语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范。多种时态的运用，使文章增加了文采，显示出英语功底；特别是文中使用了一些固定句式及短I can also get along with my teachers and classmates. We learn from each other and help each other， too. At home I can do some housework so that you can have more time to rest.等，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。 考点：考查话题类作文。
2.假如你在学校操场上捡到了一件红色夹克衫，它的主人会是谁呢？请你根据表格提示用英语写一篇短文进行合理的推测。（15分） Lily Ann Jean 不喜欢穿夹克衫 不喜欢红色 Mary Carol 夹克衫对她来说太大 当时正在操场上打球 夹克衫上有”Jean”的名字 要求：恰当的运用情态动词表示推测的语法；80词左右。
I found a red jacket on the school playground. __________________ _______________________________________________________________ 【答案】
I found a red jacket on the school playground. I think it can’t be Lily’s because she doesn’t like wearing jackets. She likes wearing different kinds of dresses every season. It can’t belong to Ann because she doesn’t like red. She likes purple best. It can’t be Mary’s because it is much too big for her. She is thin and short. It might be Carol’s because she was playing volleyball with her friends on the playground. Oh ， look! Joan’s name is on the jacket. And red is her favorite color. The jacket must be hers.
亮点说明： 文中用了许多固定短语，如kinds of，much too， like best， play… with 等； 使用了丰富的句型，如宾语从句 I think it can’t be Lily’s because she doesn’t like wearing jackets；原因状语从句It can’t be Mary’s because it is much too big for her等； 同时恰当使用了表示推测的情态动词can’t， must； 叙事条理、清晰， 逻辑性强，值得学习！ 考点：话题作文
3. 学好英语是非常重要的学科。但在英语的学习过程中，有效的学习方法是必需的。每个同学应重视和培养这方面的能力。请介绍一下，你在学习英语的过程中，取得成绩的有效学习方法。 The way of learning English 【答案】
The way of learning English
English is important and useful to us. How can we learn it well? It’s necessary to know about the ways of learning English. Here are my suggestions.
First, we should often listen to the tapes, English songs and programs. Watching English movies is also helpful to us. Second, we should speak English in class as much as possible. Don't be afraid of making mistakes. The more you speak, the fewer mistakes you'll make. We'd better join the English club and practice with others. Third, we can read more English newspapers and magazines. It's good for us. At last, we should recite some good passages and keep diaries.
In a word, as long as we do more listening, speaking, reading and writing, we will learn English well.
亮点说明: 文中用了许多固定短语，如listen to， in class, as much as possible，be afraid of等; 使用了丰
富的句型，如 It’s necessary to know about the ways of learning English.，The more you speak, the fewer mistakes you'll make等.； 同时 first, second, third, at last, in a word等词汇的运用，使事件的描述条理、清晰, 上下文意联系紧密，为文章增色不少。 考点：话题作文
4.初中生活即将结束，我们有很多不能忘记的美好记忆。与同学之间的友好交往，与老师之间的坦诚沟通。与家长之间的倾心交流……已成为我们生活中的重要内容。请以（My Past Beautiful Life)为题，写一件你与同学（或朋友、老师、家长）等曾经经历过的美好事情，以表达对他们的感激或怀念之情。 要求：1.书写规范，层次清楚，真情实意。
2.文章中不得使用你及你的朋友、同学、老师、家长的真实姓名和校名。 3.词数不少于80词。
部分参考词汇： an unforgotten time (一段难忘时光） meaningful(有意义的) thankful(感激的）moved(感动的）
My Past Beautiful Life
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I happened to pick up a schoolbag on my way home. On afternoon at the school gate. Loser is expected to take it back in our class.Myclass is Class Two, Grade Three.