发布时间 : 星期四 文章专题18 书面表达-2017年中考英语考点总动员系列（解析版）更新完毕开始阅读31669397a7c30c22590102020740be1e640ecc40
One possible version2：
My Past Beautiful Life
Our life in middle school will come to an end soon. It was an unforgotten time. I will never forget you an outgoing boy. There is always smile on your face and everybody likes to make friends with you. We used to play basketball on the playground. It was very meaningful for us to play basketball. Sometimes we went to the park and had a good time there. I always laughed a lot when I was with you. So I was thankful and moved. At this every moment I’m saying goodbye to you, I just want to give you my best wishes: I hope you are happy and healthy forever. I hope you are successful in the future.
写作亮点：这篇文章语言规范，叙述清楚，词汇及时态运用正确，能够把提示的内容叙述清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯是一篇不错的文章。 考点：话题作文。
5. Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic \（以“如
何庆祝毕业”为题写一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格。）
Situation:临近毕业,班里的同学们打算举行一次毕业庆祝活动，他们在讨论征集庆祝活动的建议。以\to Celebrate Graduation\为题写一篇英语短文，谈谈你的建议并陈述理由。 （注意，短文中不得出现考生的姓名,校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。） 【答案】
How to Celebrate Graduation
How time flies! We are going to graduate from middle school. To celebrate this unforgettable moment, as one of the graduates, I would like to offer some advice on how to celebrate graduation.
First, we can change our classroom into the festive hall, and invite our parents and teachers to enjoy our elaborate performances. Second, all of us can go to DIY Cookhouse to make a big meal for our parents and teachers to express appreciation. Last, we can revisit every place of school together, and take some photos with friends. Furthermore, we can sing the old songs that we ever shared together.
The above four points are my opinions. I hope they can be accepted.
写作亮点：这篇短文使用First、Second, Last以及Furthermore等词，使得文章非常条理，为文章增色不少。学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。
考点：话题作文。
6. 假设你是悉尼大学一名华裔学生，名叫Jason Wu。你从China Daily土看到该报正在开展主题为Change for a Better China的环保讨论活动。你打算结合自己所居住的小镇的变化，给报社写一封英文信参与讨论。内容提示见下表： 注意事项：
1. 英文信须包括表格中所有提示内容，要求语句通顺、意思连贯； 2. 表格中“感想建议”一栏须用2-3句话展开合理想象，作适当发挥； 3. 词数在90个左右，信的首尾己在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数； 4. 信件内容必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。
小镇概况 过去状况 应对措施 感想建议 参考词汇：
澳洲最美小镇(Australia's Nicest Towns) 清洁能源(clean energy)
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】 Dear Editor
I am a student of Sydney University. I am living in a small town called Hartwell with a population of around 5,000. It is one of the \al people used to bum wood to keep their houses warm in winter. That caused serious air pollution and a lot of trees were cut
Hartwell，人口约5,000，“澳洲最美小镇”之一 当地入冬天燃木取暖，引起空气污染、树木被伐 立法阻止此类活动，鼓励使用清洁能源 …… down. Laws were soon made to stop this and people were encouraged to use clean energy. I think we can do something similar in China. Perhaps we can start with using less oil. / believe we can make our world a better place if we keep trying. Yours sincerely, Jason Wu
写作亮点：短文内容包括了表格中所有提示内容，语句通顺、意思连贯。特别是第2句中的called，用过去分词作定语；后面的one of 结构，后面准确使用了一些被动语态结构； encourage sb to do sth, start with doing sth, keep doing sth等结构都用得非常恰当。 考点：提纲类作文。
7.从下面两个题目中任选一题，根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作。文中已给出内容不计人总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。 题目①
假如你是李华，你们学校将举办英语节活动，打算邀请你们的外藉教师Peter参加。请你用英语写一封电子邮件，告诉他活动的时间和地点，活动的内容，以及需要他所做的事情。 提示词语：speech competition，plays．movies，posters．camera，advice 提示问题：●When and where are you going to have the English Festival? ●What are you going to do during the English Festival? ●What would you like Peter to do? Dear Peter．
At present. we are buy with our school English Festival.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours． Li Hua
【答案】 Dear Peter，
At present， we are busy with our school English Festival. We are going to have it in May. During the festival， we will have an English speech competition at our school teaching hall. Then most of us will put on our English plays on the stage. We’ll be glad to play different roles in colorful dress. At the same time， we can enjoy wonderful English movies. What’s more， there will be lots of English posters on the walls. I can’t wait to invite you to join us. Please take your camera and take photos for us. I hope you can give us good advice about the festival as well.
I’m looking forward to your early reply. Yours， Li Ha 【解析】
试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，属于应用文写作。本文已经给出了主要写作要点，动笔前要先认真阅读要点，写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上；提示的问题就是写作的基本方向，然后围绕要点适当发挥。结合材料内容，可知时态以一般将来时态为主。语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
写作亮点：这篇短文根据问题提示简明、扼要地描述了英语节活动的时间和地点，活动内容，以及需要他所做的一些事情。时态运用非常准确。完全符合题目要求，语言准确，语意连贯，表达清楚，具有逻辑性。可看出学生的写作功底非常深厚。 考点：提纲类作文。