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3.文中不得出现任何真实信息。（姓名、校名、地名等）
【答案】We are going to the children's home to visit the children there this weekend. We’ll meet
at the school gate at eight on Saturday morning. Then we’ll go there on our school bus. What should we do at the children's home? Here are our plans.
First, we'll take some gifts to them, such as colored pencils, books and some toys. Second at the children's home, we'll draw pictures with them, read stories to them and help with their lessons. Last, we'll have a party. We can sing and dance together. We can also play games with them and tell jokes to cheer them up. I'm sure they'll enjoy the time with us.
点睛：这篇短文使用了大量的固定短语，为文章增色不少，如such as ，have a party ， play games，tell stories, sing and dance, cheer up等；First, Second，Last等的运用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理；同时语言流畅，内容完整，是一篇不错的范文。 5.【2018年湖北省恩施州中考】2009年3月至今,北京八达岭野生动物园发生了多起游客违反入园规则而导致的人员伤亡事件,这些悲剧发人深省。俗话说“没有规矩,不成方圆”,作为中学生,我们应该遵守哪些规则,请结合下图和要点提示,写一篇英语短文。 要点提示： 1.遵守交通规则; 2.不插队; 3.遵守入园规则; 4.补充两点其他的规则。 要求：
1.文中必须包含所有提示要点,可适当发挥使行文连贯;
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2.条理清晰,字迹工整,词数不少于80； 3.文中不得出现真实人名和校名等相关信息。 提示词汇: jump the queue (插队); fence (围栏)
【答案】As students, what can we do to keep our daily life m order. In my opinion, we should behave as follows:
First, while walking or driving on the road, we should obey the traffic rules. Besides, do remember not to carve or draw anywhere during visiting places of interest. What's more, making a loud noise in public is also a kind of pollution. It is as harmful as littering and spitting everywhere. Last but not least, when we go to the zoo or other public places, we should do as we are required, for example, \Only when we behave well, can we live in a well-ordered society.
写作亮点：首先，可以用一两句话陈述清楚写作的目的（keep our daily life in order），然后可以逐条写出需要遵守的规则。在一条一条罗列的 时候，可以恰当地借助一下词来表达逻辑关系，比如first，besides，what’s more，last but not least等，具体在写规则的时候要注意短语运用准确，例如obey the traffic rules 遵守交通规则，visiting places of interest 参观名胜古迹，making a loud noise in public 在公共场合大声喧哗。此外，句
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式的灵活运用也是亮点，例如用到了as…as..同级比较的结构，在末段用到了only+从句，主句倒装的结构，这些结构的使用使得文章语言更加鲜活。最后，文章用一句话结尾，总结了全文，完成了写作任务。
6.【2018年湖南省常德市】假设你是Amy，根据第二节（回答问题）材料，请用英文向市图书馆经理写一封80词以上的邮件，告诉他你丢失手机的事，如果他找到手机的话请他归还给你。 注意：1. 内容包括第二节问题答案的所有信息（顺序可调整）；2.不得出现校名和人名等真实信息。
【答案】Dear manager,
I am Amy.I lost my phone at the City Library on the afternoon of May 16.It is red.I attached my name on the phone.I want to get it back because I want to call my friends..If you find it ,you can call me at 0736-7891180.I will thank you a lot. Yours, Amy
7.【2018年江苏省连云港市】积极锻炼是非常重要的，为此，某英文报开展了一次关于初中生段炼情况的调查活动。请你根据下列图表和相关文字提示,以“Exercising is important!”为题，用英语写一篇短文。
要点 具体内容 不经常锻炼调查数据 每天锻炼的时间 的原因 7
锻炼的意义 有益身体健康;保持思维敏锐;变得自信快乐。 就如何更好地开展锻炼，提出你的建议(至少你的建议 两点)。
注意：(1)短文应包括所给内容要点,可适当发挥,使文章连贯;
(2)词数90左右,短文开头已给出,不计入总词数; (3)短文中不得提及考生所在学校及自己的姓名等信息。 (4)参考词汇:敏锐的sharp Exercising is important!
Recently, we have done a survey about students’ exercising. According to the survey, 【答案】Exercising is important!
Recenly, we have done a survey about students’ exereising, Aocording to the survey, 32% of the students spend over one hour every day doing exercise, while 68% of them spend less than one hour. The reasons are as follows: Firstly, 46% of them have too much homework, so they have no time to do exercise. Secondly, 29% of them are not good a exercise. Thirdly, 25% of them are not interested in it.
As we all know, exercising is god for our health, which keeps our minds sharp and makes us confident and happy.
In my opinion, we should keep a balance between our study and exercising, Besids, we should develop a good habit of doing exercise. (104 words)
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