发布时间 : 星期六 文章2018-2019学年上海市各区初三英语第二学期期末(二模)试题——作文范文汇编(教师版)更新完毕开始阅读421fdb7e29160b4e767f5acfa1c7aa00b52a9d25
2019届中考二模各区作文
崇明区
V． Writing（作文）（共20分）
94． Write at least 60 words on the topic＂ My happy childhood＂（以“我快乐的童年”为题写一不篇少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）
童年的回化总是美好的、发生的事情历历在日。请列举一画件事情描述一下你快乐的童年。 The following words or phrases are only for reference．（以下短语仅供参考） used to do(be) be interested in dream of be fond of grow up be proud of
（注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。） 【参考范文】
My happy childhood
Before I went to middle school, I lived with my grandparents. At that time, I stayed in the country, which was the most beautiful place for me. Early in the morning, I walked along the country road, appreciating the fresh air. We raised a little dog. He was my best friend, and he accompanied me all the time. No matter what I did and where I went, the little dog was with me and I loved him so much. Sometimes I would pick up the fruit in the garden, sometimes I would catch the fish in the clear river. It was such a happy childhood for me that I will never forget.
奉贤区
VII. Writing (作文)（共 20 分）
94. Write at least 60 words on the topic “Take time to ”(以“花时间去…写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）
(注意:短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分)
如果你把时间花在阅读上，你就会收获知识:如果你把时间花在运动上，你就会收获强健 你曾经把时间花在哪里？或者愿意把时间花在哪里？请分享你的经历或计划吧！ 【范文】
Take time to read
Nowadays, the pace of everyday life is faster than before. Most modern people are anxious living. However, I have entertainments to relax myself. One of them is reading.
During my childhood, Mom always told me stories before I went to bed. They were so interesting that I loved them right away. With the passing of the years, I grew up and learned thousands of words. To my great joy, I was soon able to read books by myself. As soon as I finished my homework, I always chose a book and sat in front of my desk to enjoy it.
I’m fond of reading novels, and my favorite is “Harry Potter.”. In addition to Harry Potter book, I enjoy reading magazines, newspapers and so on in my free time. Reading not only makes me happy but also gives me plenty of information and knowledge as well. Never do I feel bored or tired when reading.
Although life in the fourth year of junior middle school is full of pressure, I’m as carefree as a bird because of reading. It’s worthwhile to take time to read. 嘉定区
94. Write at least 60 words on the topic“——gives me courage”（以“—让我鼓起勇气”为题，写一篇不少60 个字的短文，标点符号不占格）
在生活或学习中我们难免会遇到一些困难与挫折，面对困难我们需要鼓起勇气。请结合你的一次自身经历，补充完整标题，说一说什么令你鼓起勇气，谈一谈你是如何勇敢克服困难的。 （注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则扣分。） The following is for reference only (一下表达仅供参考) （1） have difficulty in …. （2） Encourage me to…. （3） Try my best to ….. 范文
My best friend gives me courage
When speaking of someone or something that gives me courage, the first thing to come into my mind is that my best friend gives me courage when I am in trouble.
I have difficulty in learning English. However, whenever I plan to give up my English, my best friend always encourages me to have another try. She tells me that if I give it up, and mean that I have failed .What’s more, my best friend gives me shoulder to teach me English. At last, with her help, I become more and more interested in English and I am more confident than before.
In a word, my best friend gives me courage.
金山区
VII. Writing （作文）（共20分）
94.Write at least 60 words on the topic “Sometimes troubles can also make us go forward”.（请以 “有时麻烦也能促使我们前进”为题，结合自己的亲身经历，写一篇不少于60字，中心突出，语言正确、叙述流畅的短文。注意：文中不得出现考生姓名、校名、及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）（标点不计入字数）
以下仅供参考；
learn from on the other hand. overcome 【答案】
Sometimes troubles can also make us go forward
It is common for every one of us to have troubles in our life,because they exist nearly everywhere.Most people view troubles as terrible things,but,sometimes they can benefit us a lot if we are able to overcome them properly.I have had trouble in remembering English words ,which confused me for a long time since I started learning it.What surprised me
most later is that after I overcame it with the help of my English teacher,not only did I find that I could remember things even more quickly and more accurately,but also I did really well in English.Since then I have thoroughly understood the old saying that every coin has its two sides,sometimes troubles can also make us go forward. 静安区
VII. Writing(作文)(共20分)
94.Write an e-mail in at least 60 words(请写一封不少于60个词的电子邮件, 标点符号不占格.)你即将初中毕业,回顾以往,展望未来,一定有许多心里话想对父母、老师、同学、朋友...说吧？请选择一位你最想倾诉的对象,结合一个你最难忘的具体事例,给他(她)写一封电子邮件, 表达你此刻的所思所想, 并说明为何在这个特别的时刻想对他 (她) 说这件事
(注意:短文中不得出现考生和他人的真实姓名,校名及其它相关信息,.否则不予评分，标点符号不占格) 【范文】
An unforgettable experience
Everyone has some unforgettable experiences. I will never forget my first volunteer work. Last summer, our class went to a country primary school to help the students there. First, we gave away some books and stationery to them. Then we talked about school life. I was quite shy before, but to my surprise, I talked with some students for almost an hour without intermission. I shared my effective study methods with them excitedly. Finally, we played games together. All of us felt so happy.
By doing the volunteer work. I not only gained happiness, but also became more confident. It made me experience
that giving is receiving. 松江区
VII. Writing（作文）（共20分）
94. Write at least 60 words on the topic “ A/An ______ I’d like to share” （以“我想分享……”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）
在学习和生活中，你有什么值得与他人分享的？比如可以谈谈你看过的书、电影或一次难忘的经历等等，同时能让别人从中获益什么或者受到何种启发。 （注意：1. 在答题纸上将题目补充完整。
2. 短文中不得出现真实人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予给分。）
【范文】
A book I’d like to share
In the past few years, I have read so many books, but my favorite book is Harry Potter. Now I’d like to share it for everyone. I think it is a nice and a funny book. It is good for us teenagers.
I like read it because it is full of science fiction. It is easy to understand and it is the funniest book I have read. I have learned a lot from it! I know that as a teenager, we should be confident and brave like Harry Potter. And we should love and protect our friends. We all need friends. We all need get along well with our friends. If I have the chance to learn some magic skills, I’d love to be a teenager like Harry Potter. Flying and doing some magic tricks, that’s my
interest and that’s the most important reason why I love reading Harry Potter so much. 【分析】
本次作文属于半命题作文，“我想分享……”,再确定主题后，需要写出两到三点原因充分描述。对比去年2018年二模，观点及措施类难度是差不多的，重点考察学生平时素材的积累和语言表达的练习是否足够。 徐汇区
VII. Writing (作文): (共20分)
94. Write at least 60 words on the topic “My half-day plan with the exchange student” (以“我与交换生的半日活动计划”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格)
一群美国的交换生将到你学校来，校方现征集“金点子”——校内半天的互动活动，希望你带领他（她）一起参加，来感受学校的文化与特色。学课课堂学习、体育活动、趣味课堂、校园特色活动等等。请谈谈你的活动设想，并简述活动内容及其意义。
（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分） exchange student 交换生 【答案】
My half-day plan with the exchange student
I am so delighted to know that American exchange students are coming to our school for a visit. Firstly, I would like to show them around our campus, because our campus is so beautiful. We can take them to our playground, our library, our classrooms and tell them all of the interesting things. But the most important thing is that I want to introduce our amazing school clubs, because we have all kinds of different school clubs that suit different students. We can relax ourselves and learn a lot after school. I am so looking forward to their coming.
杨浦区
VII.Writing （作文）：（共20分）
94. In 60-120 words, write about the topic “A goal I would like to achieve”. 以“一个我想实现的目标”为题，写一篇60-120个词的短文，标点符号不占格）
The following are reference only. （以下内容仅供参考） What is your goal ?
Why do you want to do this ?
How do you plan to achieve your goal?
（注意：文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）
解析：
第一步：审题
1.审题目中的题干，包括英文和中文，找到关键词和限定词。
本题中的关键词有 60-120要求作文的字数范围，最好的字数在100字左右，
作文题目为 A goal I would like to achieve 要认识这是个定语从句，一个目标，一个我想要实现的目标。 注意事项等
2.审体裁或者文体
根据题目确定文体，有叙述类、叙述描写类，叙述加议论类，议论类，应用类文章，通过题目中的问题可以确