发布时间 : 星期三 文章2020新高考英语读后续写或概要写作技巧！更新完毕开始阅读482d91226cdb6f1aff00bed5b9f3f90f76c64d1e
文章需要同学们站在作者的角度，写出Sally在课堂上说话的过程。人称应以第三人称为主，第一人称为辅。时态以一般过去时为主。 2.思路点拨：
文章属于记叙文。同学们在续写故事时要有条理，遵循原文的笔调。根据续写第一段的开头语可知，Sally未能成功地在课堂上当着同学们的面说话，该段需要描写出Sally想要在课堂上当着所有同学的面说话时的表现。再结合第二段的开头语可知，Sally的第二次尝试可能成功了。同学们可以使用分词短语作状语来描写Sally当时的细微动作和心理活动，也可以反复使用简单句，凸显Sally从紧张、犹豫到后来下定决心要突破自我的过程。 【范文赏读】 Paragraph 1：
Not a word came out. Sally had been so excited about putting on a dog show for her class. She had practiced with Bella and me for weeks. Now her eyes found mine. I nodded encouragingly. She took a deep breath and opened her mouth. But her mouth, then her whole body, seemed to defeat herself. Sally stood off to the side, head down. I felt awful. Sally returned to her seat, not looking at anyone, not even Bella. Paragraph 2： The next week, she told me she wanted to try again, looking up at me with determination. We headed to Sally`s classroom. The kids were sitting in a circle on the floor listening to the teacher. They turned when we arrived. We walked to the front of the quiet room. I shook Sally`s hands and stepped back. For a few seconds that seemed like hours, she stood silently, staring at her classmates. Finally she waved her hand and whispered, “This is Sally.”Then, a little louder,“ Sally, your classmate. Looking forward to making friends with you.” 【概要写作】
概要写作这一题型一方面考查通过阅读获取文章主旨大意和关键词的能力，另一方面也考查写作能力即用简洁的语言概括文章重要信息的能力以及对文章整体结构的把握能力。该题型具有以下特点：
（1）客观性：概要写作是一种客观的复述，在正确理解原文的基础上，用自己的语言再现作者的思想，写作内容要全面，既不能漏掉任何要点，也不能随意增加内容。写作时要尽可能避免使用原文中的字句。
（2）简洁性：概要写作是一种对原文“浓缩”后产生的新语篇，通过删除原文中的细节减少例证，简化描述内容以及去除重复来实现语言的简洁性，但是简洁的同时还要做到意义的完整。
（3）连贯性：概要写作并不是写提纲那样只是要点的罗列。写概要时，必须在各要点之间增加一些体现逻辑的关系词，使概要衔接紧密、脉络清晰。写出的概要读起来要完整连贯、独立成篇。
“概要写作”答题步骤如下：
（1）细读原文。首先要仔细阅读短文，掌握文章主旨和结构，明确各段的大意。
（2）弄清要求。新高考的概要写作是写全文概要，不是写某一部分的概要，或者就某些问题写出要点。
（3）列出原文要点。分析原文的内容和结构，将内容分项扼要表述并注意在结构上的顺序。在此基础上选出与文章主题密切相关的部分。
（4）在写作时要特别注意下面几点。
·概要应包括原文中的主要事实，略去不必要的细节。
·安排好篇幅的比例，概要应同原文保持协调，即用较多的文字写重要内容，用较少的文字写次要内容。
·注意要点之间的衔接，要用适当的关联词语贯通全文，切忌只简单地写出一些互不相干的句子，但也不要每两句之间都加关联词语，以免显得生硬。
·不排斥用原文的某些词句，但不要照搬原文的句子，如果不能完全用自己的话语表达，至少对原文句子做一些同义词替换，如果结构上也能有一些转换会更好。
·计算词数，看是否符合规定的词数要求。 例题示意（选自《一遍过》高中英语必修2）：
阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
When your social calendar fills up with dinners, parties and other gatherings, it can feel like there`s a weight on you. How can you possibly do everything everyone is asking of you and still find time for yourself? Just remember: You don`t need to accept every invitation. This is especially tough during busy times of the year, like the holiday season. It`s more than OK to turn down an invitation. First, why do people have trouble refusing invitations, even when they don`t want to go? According to social psychologist Susan Newman, we often equate(使等同) being polite with saying ”yes” to everything. As a result, we think saying “no” is somehow rude to the asker. But always saying “yes” to things you really don`t want to do can be damaging. Saying “yes” to everyone else and ignoring your own needs is a recipe for feeling unbearable and unhappy. So how can you give a firm but polite “no”? Etiquette (礼仪) expert Diane Gottsman said people tend to overexplain when they refuse an invitation. Instead, keep your response simple and straightforward. When you feel uncomfortable, be ready in advance so you have a plan when an invitation comes through .Simply say, “Thank you so much .I need to check my calendar and get back to you.”Or, you can say,” It sounds like it`s going to be a wonderful party but unfortunately I already have other plans.” And finally, don`t forget that how you spend your time is your choice and nobody else`s. Know that there is more pressure around the holiday season to gather and celebrate, but how you choose to spend your time is totally up to you. Remind yourself you can see friends or families at other times of the year.
【写作思路】 1.跳读文章，找主旨
Paragraph 1: When your social calendar fills up with dinners, parties and other gatherings, it can feel like there`s a weight on you. Paragraph 2: As a result, we think saying “no” is somehow rude to the asker. But always saying “yes” to things you really don`t want to do can be damaging. Paragraph 3: Instead, keep your response simple and straightforward. Paragraph 4: And finally, don`t forget that how you spend your time is your choice and nobody else`s. 2.去枝叶，留主干
Paragraph 1: fills up with dinners, parties and other gatherings, there`s a weight on you. Paragraph 2: think saying “no” is somehow rude to the asker，always saying “yes” to things can be damaging.