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档次 A B C D E 内容 5-6 4-5 3-4 2-3 1-2 语言 4 3 2 1 0 不同文体解题方法： 记叙文 1. 讲述写作方法：要素串联法 5 / 17
记叙文主要是记叙所发生的事情和经历。常见的形式有：故事、日记、新闻报道、游记等。记叙文通常要交待清楚五要素的内容，即where, when, what, who, how, 给读者一个内容完整、细节清晰的故事。事情的叙述通常按时间的顺序叙述，让读者易于把握所叙述内容之间的内在关联，我们必须抓住记叙文的写作特点或思路，从而更好地理解文章主题，概括出比较中肯的短文中心大意。 2. 教授记叙文的概要模板： The passage/story is about a misunderstanding between a student and a teacher. The author tells us a story about a ________. The passage is a story about ________. According to the passage, the hero in the story ________. 记叙文概要分类模板 a.点明写作目的类： The writer tells us…（主题）by showing us an example of…, who/which…（故事情节）. b.作者经历类： In the passage, the writer mainly tells us his experience of doing sth, which…… c. 他人经历类： This passage is mainly about sb‘s experience of doing sth….. 例题精讲 高三一模记叙文 1.青浦区 Last year my company was brought by a large corporation and most of the managers lost their jobs. That was when i decided to do something I‘ d always wanted to do-------become a freelance writer(自由作家）. Changing professions has meant that my lifestyle has changed in a number of ways. I work about as much as I did before-------between 45 and 50 hours a week--- but my schedule is much less fixed than it used to be. Before, I worked from 8 am to 5 pm, everyday, with a few extra hours on weekends. Now, however, I work when I feel like it. For instance, sometimes I work until midnight or 2.am, then sleep until noon. I really prefer this kind of schedule. While I was working as a manager, I never exercised. I already felt tired after work, so I just came home in the evening and watched TV. However, last year I joined a health club and began to do regular exercise. As a result I have lost over 10 pounds and I feel much better, I‘ve also started to eat more healthfully. I used to eat a lot of fast food, but now I do my own shopping. I buy lots of fruits and vegetables and cook them at home. Of course, not all the changes have been that easy. For example, I don‘t feel as safe financially as used to. When I was working as a manager. I never worried much about money. I could always count on getting my paycheck every two weeks. Working freelance, I don‘t have a regular paycheck. So now I have to make sure that there‘s enough money until the next check arrives. 范文： After the author quit his previous job and became a freelance writer. Some changes his life. The work schedule became more flexible. He has also done more exercise and ate healthy. But he might not get regular wages. He found that the present lifestyle is suitable for him. 6 / 17
2.杨浦区 On a damp, boring, stay-in-the-house kind of day, I was a 4-year-old artist armed with a new treasure: my own big box of crayons（蜡笔）. Somehow, the usual paper wasn‘t special enough for these 64 perfect, sweet-smelling sticks of vivid color. I looked around for a bigger canvas（画布）. If only there were hidden walls. Walls like the ones in Mom and Dad‘s closet. Slipping quietly down the hall to the bedroom, I stood on tiptoe to reach the string for the closet light. Words and images filled my mind faster than my hands could make them. A brilliant rainbow was seen on one wall, with a cheery golden sun peeking out from above. Below, a giant shade tree supported a swing for stick-figure children. Around them, flowers bloomed everywhere. My masterpiece! All my very own magic! I took in the walls, the colors and the brightness. Joy swelled inside me. But as my creativity wound down, a thought popped up: I‘ve got to show Mom! Suddenly I was still. Mom called out, ―Dinner‘s ready.‖After a short time, her footsteps approached, and then finally, the closet door opened. I stood nervously in the corner. Mom breathed in sharply, then stood frozen. Only her eyes moved as she slowly looked over my masterpiece. She was quiet for a long, long time. I didn‘t dare breathe. Finally, she turned to me. ―I like it,‖ she said. ―No, I love it! I feel like I have a new closet!‖ Now, 45 years later, my childhood artwork is still there. And in my own house, the closet walls are masterpieces, too, created by my own daughters when they were little girls. Every time I open a closet door, I remember that, as big as that box of crayons and white walls seemed when I was little, my mother‘s love was the biggest thing of all. 【范文1】 One day when I was little, I created a beautiful picture on the walls in parents‘ closet. Although satisfied with it, I couldn‘t imagine mom‘s reaction. Instead of criticizing me for ruining the closet, mom thought highly of my artwork. Now I understand how much she loves me and I do the same to my children to develop their creativity. 【范文2】 The story happened when the writer was 4 years old. She drew pictures on the walls of the closet after getting the new crayons. Her mother praised her artwork instead of scolding her for messing up the room. The pictures remain there till now because it can serve as a reminder of mother‘s love. 小结： 记叙文：分析语篇的基本结构和主要信息，把握记叙文的主旨大意和段落大意；就日常生活中的话题和需要，灵活运用记叙文完成口头或书面的表达为了介绍一件事情，一个人等，需要找到 主要信息：人、地、时、事等 掌握写作特点和框架：What/who/when/where/why/how 议论文 1. 讲述议论文写作方法：要素串联法 第一、找出关键词和全文或段落的主题句。任何一篇文章都是围绕某个主题展开的，因此，许多文章中最7 / 17
明显的特点之一是有一个反复出现的中心词，即高频词，也叫做主题词。抓住了它，便容易抓住文章的中心。一般地说，主题词通常是名词、动词或形容词。 第二、根据原文的词句(一般指关键词和全文或段落的主题句),进行改写: 或用相应的同义词，或进行句型转换(如主动句改为被动句等等). 千万不要原封不动地抄写原文的词句. 第三、用连词连接各部分，使它连贯； 第四、整合中心要点，使用形容词、介词短语、非谓语动词短语合并、简化句子，使之符合概括短文内容要点的词数。 2. 概要模板：论点+论据(+结论) 议论文通常用来讲明道理、议论是非、提出观点和看法。作者先正面或反面提出论点，然后用事实论证论点，最后以重申论点或提出建议的方式得出结论。议论文的主题句通常在首段或尾段，或者在各段的首句或尾句。 尽可能客观简要地转述阅读材料的观点。可以采用如下方法概括：The writer of this article thinks that?或者你认为本材料的观点代表了一些人的思想，就可以说Some people think?还可以从中立的角度或用“无人称”的方式来说The article gives the view that? 如议论文的概要通常可以如此开头： The essay/passage/author highlights the importance of encouragement for students. The essay/passage/author argues in support of …, stating that … The essay/passage/author argues that we must not only value those who come first or are the best in any field but the others whose effort push them to success. The essay/passage/author discusses the impact of email. The passage/author compares friendship with the comfort of home. The passage/author outlines the harmful effects of smoking. 例题精讲 高三一模议论文 1. 静安区 Airline seats have been one-size-fits-all since the beginning. Today, those 16.5 to 18-inch wide seats are anything but. According to the World Health Organization (WHO), obesity(肥胖症)has more than doubled since 1980. In 2014, more than 1.9 billion adults were overweight, and over 600 million were obese. The unchanged seat size and increase of obese passengershighlight the conflict between airlines‘ needs and basic passenger rights. Last month, lawyer Giorgio Destro,an Italian lawyer, sued Emirates, claiming his flight was disrupted by an obese passenger seated next to him. According to reports, Destro was not able to comfortably sit in his assigned seat, and spent much of the nine-hour flight standing or sitting in crew seats, because a 400-pound passenger took up half of his seat. Many airlines have responded to the growing obesityby insisting passengers of size buy two seats to ensure safety and comfort. Samoa Air, for example, is charging by weight (which has become known as a ―fat tax‖). At first glance, the fat tax issue sounds discriminatory (歧视的), but some argue that this is purely down to numbers. A kilo is a kilo. It has nothing to do with the condition of the weight.The heavier a plane is, the more fuel it burns through. In other words, the argument is whether it is fair that a 150-pound person is charged for their 50-pound bag, when a 300-pound person with a carry-on isn‘t charged anything extra. However, Peggy Howell of NAAFA argues that obesity is an illness, and that obese people should be entitled to having certain rights protected. ―We question the legality of the discriminatory policy and whether it violates the Air Carrier Access Act governing the 8 / 17