发布时间 : 星期日 文章2017-2018学年人教课标高一英语必修4辅导：Unit 1 Women of achievement GUIDED WRITING更新完毕开始阅读5f3f81b0590216fc700abb68a98271fe900eaf18
如何介绍人物
【写作任务】
某英文报正在组织题为“My favorite teacher”的征文活动，你有意参加。请你用英语写一篇短文介绍你最喜欢的老师。
注意：词数120左右。
___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ 【写作指导】 一、审题定调
本写作任务要求介绍最喜欢的老师，属于描述性写作（descriptive writing）。此类作文是以写人为主的记叙文，主要是通过对人物典型事例的叙述来反映人物的思想、性格、品质等特点。
描写外貌、性格等常用现在时态；讲述事例常用过去时态。人称常用第三人称。
二、谋篇布局
本篇习作可分为以下三部分来写：
第一部分：引入话题（介绍人物的基本情况，如外貌、年龄等）。 第二部分：具体介绍（通过叙述典型事例反映人物性格、品质等特点）。 第三部分：总结全文（对所介绍人物进行整体评价）。 三、组织语言
1. 第一部分：引入话题（介绍人物的基本情况，如外貌、年龄等）。
普通表达 ★ ... is my favorite teacher. ★ I like my ... teacher best. ★ He / She is a(n) ..., over ... years old. ★ handsome / beautiful / thin / tall / 高级表达 ★ Of all my teachers, I like ... best / ... is my favorite one. ★ My favorite teacher is ..., an American in his / her fifties teaching us ... short / cool ... ★ good-looking / attractive / slim / of medium height / fashionable ...
2. 第二部分：具体介绍（通过叙述典型事例反映人物性格、品质等特点）。
性格、品质 普通表达 friendly / gentle / kind / wise / helpful / determined / hard-working / responsible ...
典型事例 普通表达 高级表达 ★ ... gives us assignments and checks ★ ... gives us homework to do and checks it carefully after it’s handed in. ★ ... has a special way to make his / her classes lively and interesting. ★ ... always encourages us to express ourselves freely. ★ ... often organizes activities such as ... them carefully after they’re collected. ★ ... teaching style is quite different from that of other teachers in our school. ★ ... is able to create an atmosphere in which everyone would like to voice our minds actively. ★ ... often organizes activities such as ..., from which we benefit a lot.
3. 第三部分：总结全文（对所介绍人物进行整体评价）。
普通表达 ★ We all like / respect ... very much. ★ ... is one of the greatest teachers in my mind. 高级表达 ★ We all show great affection / respect for ... ★ Such is my favorite teacher, a good 高级表达 easy-going / considerate / learned / single- -minded / diligent / reliable ... ★ ... is highly thought of by teachers and and inspired one. students. ★ I feel so lucky to have such an amazing teacher.
【范文展示】
普通范文
My English teacher Mark is my favorite teacher. He is an American, over 50 years old. He is tall and thin. He always wears a pair of thick glasses.
Mark is a responsible teacher with over ten years’ teaching experience. On weekdays, he gives us homework to do and checks it carefully after it’s handed in. He has a special way to make his classes lively and interesting. In his class, he always encourages us to express ourselves freely. Besides, Mark is also kind and easy-going. In his spare time, he often organizes activities such as outings and parties for us. We all enjoy playing with him.
Mark is one of the greatest teachers in my mind.
高级范文
My favorite teacher is Mark, an American in his fifties teaching us English. With a thin but fit figure of about 180 centimeters in height, he always wears a pair of thick glasses on his nose.
Mark is a strict and highly experienced teacher. On weekdays, he gives us assignments and checks them carefully after they’re collected. His teaching style is quite different from that of other teachers in our school. He’s able to create an atmosphere in which everyone would like to voice our minds actively. Apart from that, he’s easy to get along with. In his spare time, he often organizes activities such as outings and parties for us, from which we benefit a lot.
I feel so lucky to have such an amazing teacher.
温馨提示：同学们，通过对两篇文章的对比，我们可以看到高级范文用到了更高级的词汇和更复杂的句型。同学们在学习的过程中也要注意积累高级词汇和表达，让自己的作文更精彩。 【实战演练】
假定你是李华，你的美国笔友David想与你的朋友李平结为笔友，写信向你询问他的一些情况。请你给他回一封信，从出身、学习、性格等方面对李平进行简要介绍。
注意：1. 词数100左右（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数）； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear David,
How’re you doing these days? I’m writing to tell you something about my friend Li Ping.
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Yours, Li Hua
答案 Dear David,
How’re you doing these days? I’m writing to tell you something about my friend Li Ping.
He came from a poor family in a faraway mountain village. He’s now well-known in our school because he performed very well in the final examination and won a scholarship.
When he first came to our school, he wasn’t better than most of us. But he didn’t lose heart. He made a detailed plan for his studies and put a lot of effort into them. Therefore, he made rapid progress and became one of the top students in our school.
Besides, he’s always ready to help others and gets along well with us. I’m proud to have such an excellent friend. I hope you’ll become good friends.