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专题41 书面表达三
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62.同学们，在初中三年的英语学习中，我们从课本中学习了有关 “Family”、 “Be polite to sb.”、“Protecting the environmment”、 “Volunteering”等话题和功能。假定你是李磊，请参考这些话题和功能，依据以下要点提示，写一篇题为 “I’m Proud of My Family”的英语短文，向校报投稿，讲述你的家庭故事。 要点提示：
1、家人相亲相爱，努力学习、工作； 2、邻里和睦，礼貌待人； 3、爱护环境，从我做起： 写作要求
l、词数90左有（短文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数）； 2、根据要点提示，适当发挥； 3、短文中不得出现真实的姓名及校名。
参考词汇：Work hard; be friendly to each other, get on well with; protect the environment； be volunteers
I’m Proud of My Family
My name is Li Lei.I have a happy family. There are four people in my family: my parents, my sister and I.
【答案】My name is Li Lei. I have a happy family. There are four people in my family: my parents, my sister and I.
My family love each other. (My parents love us and we love our parents.) My parents both work hard. My sister and I study hard at school, too.
My family are kind and friendly to our neighbors. We are all polite to each other. We get on well with each other.
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My family try our best to protect the environment in our daily life. My mom and my sister usually bring a bag to go shopping. My father is used to taking the bus to work. I never order takeaway food.
My family are glad to be volunteers at any time. My parents often help the children in poor areas. (My sister helps in the school library twice a week.) Sometimes I read newspapers to the old people.
What a happy family! I’m proud of my family! 【解析】
这是一篇话题作文，根据材料中的相关信息讲述一下你的家庭故事。所提供的材料中命好了题目：I’m Proud of My Family。主要从1、家人相亲相爱，努力学习、工作；2、邻里和睦，礼貌待人；3、爱护环境，从我做起：这三个方面去介绍。时态为一般现在时，人称为第一人称。注意作文中必须包含材料上的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。 【高分句型一】
My family try our best to protect the environment in our daily life. 我的家人尽力保护我们日常生活中的环境。
该句话运用了：try one’s best to do sth. 尽力做某事。protect the environment：保护环境。 【高分句型二】
My father is used to taking the bus to work. 我父亲习惯乘公共汽车上班。 这句话运用了：be used to doing sth. 习惯于做某事。
总之，本文运用了大量的简单句，虽然没有复合句，但是这写简单句把作者的一家人的生活描写的入情入理，就像是发生在我们的眼前一样。
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66.第二节书面表达
假如你是国际学校的学生李华，你的同学Tom写了一封邮件询问你暑假的安排，请给 Tom回封邮件，告知你的计划，并邀请他来黄石游玩。 内容包括：1、读几本好书；
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2、参加社会实践活动； 3、帮父母做家务； 4、和朋友一起锻炼； 5、邀请Tom。
注意： 1、词数80左右；
2、可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3、文中不能出现与本人相关信息； 4、开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。 参考词忙：有意义的 meaningful 经典文学作品classic literature works 社会实践活动social practice activities Dear Tom，
I'm very happy to hear from you.
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Tom，
I'm very happy to hear from you. How are you going these days? Summer vacation is coming soon. Here I’d like to share my holiday plan with you. First of all, I am going to read some good books to open up my mind. What’s more, I’ll take part in some volunteer activities to raise awareness of serving the society and improve my social communication ability. Of course, exercise is must. I will run, play basketball, ride a bike and so on. Last but not least, I am about to invite you to visit my hometown, Huangshi and I really want to meet you.
How about yours? I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours, Li Hua
【解析】
本文属于材料作文，写信告诉汤姆你的暑假计划并邀请汤姆来黄石玩。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。
亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如would like to do, share sth with, be going to, open up one’s mind, take part in, awareness of serving the society, of course, and so on, be about to do, invite sb to do, look forward to doing以及first of all, what’s more和last but not least,增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。
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茶是中国传统饮食文化的组成部分，是生活中不可或缺的饮品。作为中学生，我们应了解茶并传播茶文化。请根据以下要点提示，写一篇英语短文。
要点提示：1.历史悠久，约5000年前神农首次发现茶可以饮用； 2.种植广泛，安溪和杭州尤以茶闻名： 3.喝茶有很多好处：有利健康，醒脑提神等； 4.世界各地许多人喜欢喝茶并收集茶具。
写作要求：1.文章必须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥以使行文连贯； 2.词数：80词左右；（文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数） 3.文中不得出现真实姓名及校名。
China is famous for tea.
【答案】One possible version：China is famous for tea.Chinese tea has a long history.It's said that Shen Nong was the first to discover tea as a drink about 5，000 years ago.Tea is produced in many different areas Anxi and Hangzhou are widely known for their tea.
There are lots of advantages of drinking tea.It's good for health.A cup of ca can make you relaxed and fresh.It seems that many people all over the world love drinking tea and collecting tea scts. As middle schol students，we should kmow about tea culture and spread it around the world. 【解析】
茶是中国传统饮食文化的组成部分，是生活中不可或缺的饮品。作为中学生，我们应了解茶并传播茶文化。
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