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1. 设立英语角目的：提高学生对学习英语的兴趣，提高英语口语 2．英语角的具体安排
①时间和地点：在本班教室，每周五下午5点到6点
②英语角的内容：与同学交谈感兴趣的话题，可以谈论你学到的东西，也可以描述班上有趣的事情 3．欢迎大家参加英语角
第二步：列提纲（重点词汇、短语 ）
share …with …；promote；interest；improve oral English；set up；last；talk with；be interested in；discuss；describe；invite；join；enjoy oneself 第三步：连词成句
(1) I'm very glad to share my English Corner Plan with you.
(2) The English Corner is aimed to promote our interest in learning English and improve our oral English. (3) I' m planning to set up an English Corner in our classroom.
(4) The English Corner will last one hour from 5:00 to 6:00 every Friday afternoon. (5) You can talk with your partners about everything that you are interested in. (6) You can discuss what you have learnt. (7) Every one of you is welcome to the Corner.
(8) I'd like to invite our foreign teacher, Mr. Baker, to join the Corner.
根据提示和关键词进行遣词造句,适当地运用句型，注意时态和主谓一致问题。 第四步：连句成篇(衔接词)
表示时间顺序： First of all; to begin/start with ,In the beginning Firstly....Secondly.... Lastly / Finally/ In the end
表示并列或补充关系：what is more; besides, moreover , apart from; in addition, as well as；not only…but (also), meanwhile, in the meantime, some...some…others
表示转折对比关系：but, however, although, though, yet, while, on one hand…on the other hand... 表示因果关系：because, as, therefore, As a result , as a consequence , consequently , thus
连句成文，运用恰当的衔接词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，使句与句之间逻辑性更强、段与段之间结构清晰。
范文要点全面，结构清晰，过渡词的运用如for example , meanwhile ,使文章层次分明，上下文连贯，在表达时用到了很多高级词汇，如 share …with …与某人分享……；promote促进；improve oral English提高英语
口语；set up建立；last持续；talk with与某人交谈；be interested in对……感兴趣；discuss讨论；invite邀请；join参加；enjoy oneself玩得高兴等；复杂句式的运用提升了文章层次，如目的状语的运用In order to promote our interest in learning English and improve our oral English；定语从句的运用which will last one hour from 5:00 to 6:00 every Friday afternoon；宾语从句的运用you can discuss what you have learnt等。
7. 【2020届陕西省西安中学高三第三次模拟】假如你是李华，你的英国笔友 Tom 听说中国爆发了新型冠状病毒疫情，非常担心你的处境，特来信询问，请你给他写封回信，内容包括： 1. 感谢他的关心；2. 你的应对措施；3. 你的盼望。注意：1. 词数 100 左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
词汇：新型冠状病毒肺炎 novel coronavirus pneumonia；流行病 epidemic Dear Tom,
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Yours, Li Hua
【答案】Dear Tom,
With grateful thanks, I’m writing to extend my sincere appreciation for all your care and concern, which is undoubtedly a great encouragement and support for our ongoing anti-coronavirus epidemic campaign.
To check the quick spread of the deadly virus, home quarantine is the top priority for all Chinese. Every family in our city is allowed to do some shopping outside their neighborhood once every two days. As for us students, thanks to various online communication apps, Tencent Class for instance, we interact with our dear “cyber celebrity” teachers through live-streaming classes, but the prolonged screen time takes a heavy toll on my eyes, so I’ve come up with creative indoor relaxations such as dancing, singing and drawing to keep up my health.
I’m definitely convinced that with joint efforts of the whole nation, China will win the battle and make a quick recovery. Thanks again and I will be exceedingly delighted to repay your kindness by showing you around my city in the coming summer vacation.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
本篇书面表达是一封书信，假定你是李华，你的英国笔友 Tom 听说中国爆发了新型冠状病毒疫情，非常担心你的处境，特来信询问，请你给他写封回信。
这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，不能遗漏要点：1. 感谢他的关心；2. 你的应对措施；3. 你的盼望。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
根据写作要点我们可以初步确定文章可能使用到的词汇和短语有：extend my sincere appreciation for all your care and concern，a great encouragement and support，as for，thanks to，interact with，come up with，creative indoor relaxations，such as，keep up my health， with joint efforts of the whole nation，win the battle，make a quick recovery，be delighted to，repay your kindness，show sb around。可以使用的衔接词：1.表文章结构顺序：First of all，Firstly/First，Secondly/Second… And then，Finally，In the end，At last，Above all。2.表并列补充关系：What is more，Besides，Moreover，Furthermore，In addition，as well as，not only…but (also)。通过词汇铺垫，我们就很容易地行文了，文章写完之后要检查文中是否存在拼写或语法错误。
范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了主从复合句：With grateful thanks, I’m writing to extend my sincere appreciation for all your care and concern, which is undoubtedly a great encouragement and support for our ongoing anti-coronavirus epidemic campaign. 这句话运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句；I’m definitely convinced that with joint efforts of the whole nation, China will win the battle and make a quick recovery.这句话运用了that引导的宾语从句。使用了一些固定词组，如：as for ，thanks to ， interact with ，come up with ，keep up， show sb around sth。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
8. 【安徽省芜湖市2019-2020学年高三上学期教学质量检测】假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Michael在学校举办的“中国诗词大会”比赛中获得了外国选手组一等奖。请根据以下提示写一封英文电子邮件向他表示祝贺。
1. 祝贺他获奖； 2. 肯定他付出的努力；
3. 询问何时方便，一起交流一下中国古诗词学习心得。
注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 中国诗词大会 Chinese Poetry Contest Dear Michael,
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Yours, Li Hua
【答案】Dear Michael,
I am writing to offer my sincere congratulations on your winning the first prize of your group in the Chinese Poetry Contest. As your friend,I just want you to know how delighted I am at your success.
For these years, you’ve shown great interest in Chinese poetry and kept on reciting poems every day. Not only have you accumulated much knowledge about Chinese poetry, but also you have formed a deep understanding of it. Your appreciation towards those poems are sometimes beyond our reach. You deserve to win this prize.
At last,I hope to have a talk with you as to exchanging our understanding towards learning Chinese poetry. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours, Li Hua
【解析】
这是一篇提纲类作文。
第1步：根据提示可知，假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Michael在学校举办的“中国诗词大会”比赛中获得了外国选手组一等奖。请根据以下提示写一封英文电子邮件向他表示祝贺。1. 祝贺他获奖；2. 肯定他付出的努力；3. 询问何时方便，一起交流一下中国古诗词学习心得。