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fish, vegetables and fruits. Because they are good for my health. I want to drink milk between two meals. I exercise more, and swim twice a week. I think I will have a healthy lifestyle and I will be healthier in this way.
5、最近，你们学校开展了以“中国梦，我的梦”为主题的活动，作为一名中学生应该有自己的梦想， 你的梦想是什么呢？请以“My dream”为题写一篇英语短文。
要求：1.描述自己的梦想。 2. 如何实现这个梦想。
3. 80—100 个词左右，可适当发挥。 My dream
答案
One possible version： My dream
Everyone has his dream. My dream is to be a doctor. When I was in Grade Seven. I was sick and often went to see doctors. The doctors were very friendly to me and they often cheered me up. With the help of them, I was getting better. Now I’m very healthy. Since then I have hoped to become a doctor. In order to achieve my dream, I will study hard. I’ll give my love to the patients as much as possible and help them out of danger.
To be a doctor is really great. I think my dream will come true one day.
6、文段表达（10分）
根据题目要求和英文提示词语，写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于50词的短文。所给英文提示词语仅供选用。
假如你叫李华，最近和美国朋友Jim通过邮件谈论各自的好友，请你根据他的问题回复邮件。
提示词语：tall, kind-hearted, help, encourage, important
To Jim From Li Hua Subject My best friend Hi!Jim, I’m glad to hear from you._____________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ Yours , Li Hua
答案 Hi Jim,
I’m glad to hear from you. I’d like to introduce my best friend Zhang Nan to you.
Zhang Nan is a lovely girl. She is tall and thin with short hair. She often wears a pink dress.
Zhang Nan is kind-hearted and always ready to help others. When we were in Grade Seven, she was good at maths and she often helped me after class. She encouraged me to work out the problems. Day by day I made great progress with her help. Then we became good friends. I think friendship is the most important thing in my life. It is like hidden treasure. It brings me happiness and confidence. Yours, Li Hua
7、请根据表格情况写一段短文介绍你的朋友Wang Ming。不少于6句。 Name Wang Ming Age 11 From Class Grade Telephone number 7 (010)8769-5419 England 4 答案This is my friend. Her name is Wang Ming. He is from England. He is eleven years old. He is in Class 4, Grade Seven. His telephone number is 010-87695419.
解析试题分析：这篇作文要求我们用至少六句话来介绍一下自己的朋友Wang Ming。内容包括姓名、年龄、班级、国籍和电话号码。这些句子都是教材中学过的，学生们都非常的熟悉。写的时候要注意使用正确的人称，和正确的动词进行搭配。通过审题可知，这篇作文应该使用第三人称来写，
所以be动词应该用is。注意在表达班级这一项的时候，某年级某班都要用大写字母开头，并且先说班级，再加数字。另外写作时，试着用一些连词，将句子连接，使文章更加的连贯。
【亮点说明】这是一篇不错的作文。作者按照题目的要求介绍了自己的好朋友Wang Ming。首先作者先用一句This is my friend 开头，点明文章的主题。接下来从国籍、班级、年龄、电话等方面进行了具体的介绍。整篇短文语言规范，句式表达符号英语习惯，没有语法错误。特别是在表述班级情况的时候，He is in Class 4, Grade Seven使用了正确的格式。如果能使用一些简单的连词，可以使文章更连贯就更好了。
8、请按照下面提供的信息用英文介绍一下你的学校, 要求语句通顺连贯。（60词左右）
1. 我叫Millie, 在育才中学学习。 2. 我的学校不大，但很美。 3. 学校有一个操场，许多树和花。
4. 没有图书馆，但有三个阅览室。还有两个电脑房。
5. 有40个班级，两千名学生，老师都很友好而且乐于助人（helpful）. 6. 我们在学校很开心。 My school
答案My school
Hello, my name is Millie. I study in Yucai Middle School. Let me tell you something about my school. My school is not big but very beautiful. There is a playground, many trees and flowers in my school. There aren’t any libraries, but there are three reading rooms. There are two computer rooms, too. There are 40 classes and 2,000 students in my school. Teachers are all friendly and helpful. I like my school and we are happy in our school.
9、书面表达（15分）