发布时间 : 星期三 文章2017-2018学年高中英语 Unit 5 Travelling abroadSection Ⅴ更新完毕开始阅读7c546aa5366baf1ffc4ffe4733687e21ae45ff67
Unit 5 Travelling abroadSection Ⅴ Writing-写给笔友的信
一、基本结构
第一部分，呼应来信、介绍现状。 第二部分，回答问题或叙述经过。 第三部分，提出愿望。 二、增分佳句
(一)书信的开头常用句式
1．Thank you for your last letter asking about ...
2．I'm very glad to tell you what you have always hoped/what you asked me. (二)书信的主体常用句式
1．I would like to be a volunteer, for I will be free during the summer holidays. 这个暑假我有空，想成为一名志愿者。
2．I am good at spoken English; as a result, I won the first prize in an English Speech Contest in our school last year.
我擅长英语口语，结果，我去年在我们学校举行的英语演讲比赛中获得一等奖。 3．I hope to learn more about society and improve my communication skills by being a volunteer; meanwhile I can help visitors know more about Chinese culture.
我希望更多地了解社会，通过志愿者服务提高我的交流技巧，同时我可以帮助游客知道更多的中国文化。
4．In your spare time, you can enjoy yourself in many places. 闲暇之余，你可以有很多地方休闲娱乐。 (三)书信的结尾常用句式 1．Best wishes/regards to you! 2．Good luck to you!
3．Please give my best wishes to ... 4．Looking forward to hearing from you!
[题目要求]
假如你是李华，请根据下面提示给你的笔友John写一封信件，介绍你的海外留学过程。
注意：文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear John，
Thank you for your letter dated September 12. Looking forward to your reply. Yours， Li Hua
第一步：审题构思很关键 一、审题
1．确定体裁：本文为书信；
2．确定人称：本文的主要人称应为第一人称； 3．确定时态：主要使用一般过去时和一般现在时。 二、构思
第一部分，介绍现状——秘鲁一家大学攻读学士学位。 第二部分，叙述经过——签证、适应、学习等。 第三部分，提出愿望。 第二步：核心词汇想周全
1．spend_some_time_(in)_doing_sth. 花费时间做某事 2．make_full_preparations 做了充分的准备 3．adjust_to_ 适应 4．settle_in 安顿
5．be_occupied_with_... 忙于…… 6．put_forward 提出
7．keep_it_up_ 保持下去；保持优秀成绩 第三步：由词扩句雏形现
1．现在我在秘鲁的一所大学里为我的学士学位而学习。
Now I'm_studying in a university in Peru for my bachelor's degree. 2．离开我的祖国前，我花了大量时间排队得到我的签证。
Before I_left_my_motherland,_I had_spent_much_time_queuing to get my visa. 3．虽然我为新生活做了充分的准备，但刚开始我还是不适应。
Although I_had_made_full_preparations_for_my_new_life,_I didn't adjust_to it
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at first.
4．后来，我逐渐地适应了那里的日常生活。
Later, I gradually fit_in_with_the_routine of life there. 5．为了提高学习，我的朋友建议我住在当地人家里。 To
improve
my
study,
my
friend
recommended
that
I_(should)_live_in_a_local_family.
6．当我在我的新家安顿好以后，我就忙于自己的学业功课。
After I_settled_in_my_new_home,_I was_occupied_with my subject. 7．我的导师是一个很严格的教授，他提出很多要求。
My tutor is_a_strict_professor,_and he put_forward many requirements. 第四步：句式升级造亮点 1．用不定式作目的状语改写句1
Now_I'm_studying_in_a_university_in_Peru_to_receive_my_bachelor's_degree. 2．用介词before改写句2
Before_leaving_my_motherland,_I_had_spent_much_time_queuing_to_get_my_visa. 3．用非谓语作让步状语改写句3
Having_made_full_preparations_for_my_new_life,_I_didn't_adjust_to_it_at_first.
4．用recommend sb. to do sth.改写句5
To_improve_my_study,_my_friend_recommended_me_to_live_in_a_local_family. 5．用非谓语作时间状语改写句6
Having_settled_in_my_new_home,_I_was_occupied_with_my_subject. 6．用非谓语作状语改写句7
Being_a_strict_professor,_my_tutor_put_forward_many_requirements. 第五步：过渡衔接联成篇 Dear John， Thank
you
for
your
letter
dated
September
12.
Now_I'm_studying_in_a_university_in
_Peru_to_receive_my_bachelor's_degree._Before_leaving_my_motherland,_I_had_spent_much_time_queuing_to_get_my_visa._Having_made_full_preparations_for_my_new_life,_I_didn't_adjust_to_it_at_first._Later,_I_gradually_fit_in_with_the_routine_of_life_there._To_improve_my_study,_my_friend_recommended_me_to_live_in_a_local_family._In_this_way,_I_can_improve_my_study._Having_settled_in_my_new_home,_I_was_occupied_with_my_subject._Being_a_strict_professor,_my_tutor_put_forward_ma
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ny_requirements._Now_I_do_well_in_my_subject_and_I_will_keep_it_up.
Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua
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