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2019高考英语冲刺强化训练：短文改错
4. 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文，文中共10处错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 一、改错题
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(A)，并在其下面写出该加的词。 1. 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。作文
删除；把多余的词用斜线（\\）划掉。
中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）并在其下面写出该加的词。 注意：1)每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
删除：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 2)只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改的词。 Challenges of life are of great importance in our grow. They remind me my days in senior high school which I was in the military training. It was the first time that I have lived away from my home, so I found it difficult to fit 注意：1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
in. And the training officer was strict in me. I once thought I couldn't stick to the end. But anyway, I was
2）只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
succeeded. The trials made it much easy for me to adapt to life, but the difficulties I came across have now become Last Friday I saw the worst weather in years. In the morning, the sun was completely blocked so that I could a precious memory in my life. In short, learning to regard the challenges of life as the stepping stone to future see something clearly. I stayed at home, look outside. That came into sight was a flash of lightning. Seconds later, success and make the best of them.
the noise of thunder broke the silent. Then a strong wind starts to blow into my room. Pieces of paper on my desk 5. 请改正下面短文中的错误。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的was blown high into the air and some flew out the open window. Then I closed the window when it rained hard 增加、删除或修改。
and near broke my window.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词； What a bad weather! I hate it so I can't go out to play.
2. 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉；
每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。 注意：1）每处错误及其修改词均仅限一词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\\）划掉。
2）只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 There may be two mainly reasons for the popularity of English in China in recent year: the economic(经济注意：1）每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
的)reform and the open policy. With the development of international trade and co-operation, English as the
2）只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
international language play a more and more important role. The demand for people known English is increasing. The labor market requires you to do business with foreign companies, to open foreign markets, and to learn to use The Dragon Boat Festival has history of over 2,000 years. There are many tales about their origin. The most up advanced technology from abroad. They are also needed to participate international affairs. University students popular is when the festival is celebrated in honor of Qu Yuan. Qu Yuan was very concerned about his country but who English level is high are easily employed and well pay. This encourages people to learn English.
was not understanding by the rulers. Feeling desperate, he jumped into the Miluo River on the 5th day of the 5th lunar month, 278 BC. Before he died, the fishermen sailed their boats to look up for his body. People throw Zongzi 6. 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错into the water, hoping to prevent possible fish attack his body. That's because people later celebrate the festival 误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 through such activity as dragon boat racing and eating zongzi on that special day.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。 3. 请改正下面短文中的错误。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的删除：把多余的词用斜线（\\）划掉。
增加、删除或修改。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词； 注意：1）答案应写在答题卡上 删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉；
2）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 3）只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
注意：1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
We're living in a world where we can never stress the important of sharing too much. By sharing, we can often 2）只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
great reduce our sadness and double our happiness.
With the proverb goes, \ When it came to this topic, memories flood into my mind. There was a time when I caught in the sadness of not food and ate too many. As a result, I was too heavily overweight that I suffered a lot from my awkward appearance. passing an important exam. My world turned gray and I didn't feel interested in something until my best friend Worse still, my classmates play jokes on me at times. From then on, I made up my mind to avoid snacks and to came up to comfort me. Encouraged and moved by his kindness, I shared my trouble with him, that relieved me take up jogging to lose weights. Because of the timely change, it was not long after I did succeed in creating my soon. Little by little I regained my confidence. The followed months witnessed my efforts, and I finally made a new image. Only then did I realize the importance of forming good habit.
great progress in other important exams.
To be honest, the change in our habit means a lot to me, which is good for my success and helps me regain As you can see, which was sharing with my friend that helped me out of that dark time and bring back my confidence.
confidence. Sharing is beautiful, not only physically but also mentally.
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7. 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文，文中共有10处语言错⒉只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删改或修改。 I am a Grade three student in China. I hope to go to your university to learn English after finish my high school. 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（Λ），并在其下面写出该加的词。 English played an important part in our daily life but I like it so much that I want to be a teacher of English. I have 删除：把多余的词用斜线（\\）划掉。
a little difficult in English. But I will study hardly to improve it if I have an opportunity go to your university. 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
Besides, I like your city because it has an environment which differs with my city. And I will make many friend 注意：1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
and communicate frequently with him. I'd appreciate it if you take my application into the consideration. 2）只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
11. 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下短文。短文中共有10处错误， I'm a high school students in China. History is one of my most favorite subjects. My friends always laugh me 每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 because they don't understand why I'm such enthusiastic about history. They say it's bored and it's the useless 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。 subject. But I don't think so. In their opinion, history taught us who we are and where we come from. I enjoy look 删除：把多余的词用斜线（\\）划掉．
back at points in the past and thinking about why certain decisions were making. I believe I can develop the skill 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 of making decisions through studying history.
注意：⒈每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
8. 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10 处语言错误，⒉只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 We are required to collect our smart phones and keep it in the teacher's during the weekdays. In fact the most of 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。 us obey this regulation, but some still play various trick against it. I'm among those. Once, I hand in a waste phone. 删除：把多余的词用斜线（\\）划掉。
Mr. Li, our head teacher, seemed ignore all that. So I felt very luckily to have an extra phone with me. And good 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 times don't last long. \？I forgot to take mine by chance. \注意：1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
waste phone and dialing. You can see how embarrassing I was at the scene!
2）只允许修改 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分。
12. 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错 People always say that we lack of the eyes of realizing the beauty in life. I can't agree complete. Last Friday, I 误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 woke up very early and decide to take a walk. In the square there many senior citizens were dancing, I found 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。 several elders bury in feeding birds. Without many cars, I realized the city looked so clean but beautiful. Some 删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
coffee shops were decorated pretty well, which attracted our eyes. The whole city was covered with green trees, 删除：在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 making it green city. At this moment, I found the city was so interested. How I regret ignore its beauty before! 注意：1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
9. 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错2）只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 One evening after supper, Mom or I went to our little vegetable garden, only to find quite a few cucumbers 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。 were destroyed. Dried leaf were left on the ground, making us feel sadly. Observing carefully, we found some 删除：把多余的词用斜线（\\）划掉。
animal footprints here. We guessed that it must be a pet dog that had made up the mess.
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 Several days later, to our great excite, the damaged vegetables begin to grow again. Some even had little 注意：1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
cucumbers, which goes as the saying “Misfortune may be an actual good thing!”. This taught him a good 2）只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
lesson—We should treat a bad thing in positive way instead of turn angry.
I am very luckily to have the opportunity to see so many place, but sometimes I experience culture shock when 13. 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错I see or do something new. Dad and I now are travelled through Denmark, Norway and Sweden. I used to thinking 误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 that these countries are the same, but not any more. People in Denmark are a bit of friendlier, while Norwegians 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。 and Swedes prefer not to talk to strangers. I'm surprised to learn that many people there speak English in addition 删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
their national languages. In Sweden, it seems that anyone has golden hair and blue eyes. I feel a little strange with 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 my black hair and dark eyes. I imagine this is that foreigners feel when they visit China!
注意：
10. 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词:
误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 2）只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。 On December 30, after two weeks' training, we finally began our work for volunteer guides in a museum. 删除：把多余的词用斜线(\\)划掉。
During the first two weeks, I learnt a lot about the story behind the artworks. In order to do good in the work, my 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 teammates and I made fully preparations. We first worked out a careful plan. Then we practiced use proper body 注意：⒈每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
language to explain the artworks better. The month-long volunteer work has now come to end, from what I
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understand that it isn't easy to be a good guide. Besides. I also realize that how important teamwork is. I believed that I will get lifelong benefits from the short and meaningful experience.
14. 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：
1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词:
2）只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
As we all know, questioning can lead to searching for an answer. If we are in the habit raising doubts as to whether that we are told is true, we can find the correct answer and learn more.
Two years ago, our teacher offered us an answer to a difficult math problem in class. Although the answer seemed a little strange, but nobody except me doubted it. Think that his answer might be wrong, I carefully
analyzed the problem and tried to work them out in a different way. Half a hour later, I managed to find the correct answer. When I showed my answer to him, the teacher praised me as my independently thinking.
From this experiences, I have learned that questioning can serve as a bridge that help us to seek the truth.
15. 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌系的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（\\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线（__），并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1）每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2）只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
A charity sale was held in our school playground in last Sunday. We prepared many things making by hand, such as kites and model planes. We also brought old toys or second- hand books to sell. When the activity started, lots of students participated in them and chose their favorite items. In end, we made 2,000 yuan in all. We donate the money to the community to help children who couldn't attend school.
I had a wonderfully experience. I am proud of which we have done. If everyone makes a contribution for the charity, the world will become much good than it used to be.
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【点评】本题考点涉及冠词，代词，连词，时态，介词，非谓语动词以及名词等多个知识点的考查，是一
答案解析部分
篇故事类阅读，覆盖面广，综合性强，难度较大，区分度高。
3.【答案】 ①with→as ②去掉
一、改错题
from ③Enter→Entering ④many→much ⑤too→so ⑥play→played ⑦weights→weight ⑧after→befo1.【答案】
re ⑨good habit前添加a ⑩our→my
①something→nothing ②look→looking ③That→What ④silent→silence ⑤start→started ⑥was→were【解析】【分析】本文是一篇记叙文。作者在高中时由于过度贪吃而体重过胖，于是决定改作出改变。最 ⑦out后加of ⑧near→nearly ⑨a去掉 ⑩so→because
终改掉了不好的习惯，养成好的习惯成功地改变了自己的形象，用自己的故事来证明“好习惯让你一生受【解析】【分析】本文是一篇记叙文，作者讲述了上星期五所遭遇的恶劣天气。
益”。
①考查代词。句意：所以，我什么也看不清。根据句意可知是我什么也看不清，故something改为nothing。 ①考查定语从句。句意：正如俗语所说，“好习惯让你终生受益”。分析句子可知，本句是非限制性定语从 ②考查非谓语动词。句意：我呆在家里，看着外面。这里动词look，作stay的伴随状语，故用现在分词。句，即“正如….”，英语中表达“正如”要用关系词“as”，而with是介词，不能跟句子。故把with改为as。 故将look改为looking。
②考查介词。句意：正如俗语所说，“好习惯让你终生受益。”sth. benefit ab，“某事有益于某人”，而“sb. benefit ③考查名词性从句。句意：一眼就看见了一道闪电。故将That改为What。分析句子可知，从句缺少主语，from sth.”为“某人某事中受益”。本句的主语是好习惯，“物”使人受益，故要用benefit sb.，所以from是多故用关系词what，因此 That改为What 。
余的，要去掉from。
④考查名词。句意：雷声打破了沉默。定冠词the后用名词。故将silent改为silence。
③考查非谓语动词。“Enter high school,”在句中作状语，其逻辑主语是主语“I”，“I”与动词“enter”二者是主 ⑤考查时态。根据全文可知，这里用一般过去时。句意：然后，一阵强风开始吹进了我的房间。故将start
动关系，分析句意可知，此处是指“我一进入高中，我对快餐很着迷，吃得太多了”，故要用动词的ing形改为started。
式做状语，因此Enter改为Entering。
⑥考查主谓一致。句意：桌上的一些纸被吹得很高。因为主语是. Pieces of paper，谓语故用复数形式。故 ④考查形容词。句意：上高中时，我对快餐很着迷，吃得太多了。food为不可数名词，因此要用too much，将was改为were。
不能用too many。故把many改为much。
⑦考查介词。句意：一些飞出了窗外。fly out后接名词the open window需加of。故在out后加of。 ⑤考查副词。句意：结果，我体重如此过重，以至于我的难看外表让我很痛苦。“so+形容词+that….”为固 ⑧ 考查副词。句意：几乎把我窗户打破。动词前用副词修饰。故将near改为nearly。 定句式，意为“如此…以至于….”，因此句中的too要改为so。故把too改为so。
⑨考查冠词。句意：天气多么坏啊！名词weather是不可数名词，故不用冠词。故将a去掉。 ⑥考查时态。句意：更糟的是，同学们有时会取笑我。文章讲述的是过去的事，故要用一般过去时，故 ⑩考查连词。句意：因为我不能出去玩。根据句意可知后句是原因。故将so改为because。
play改为played。
【点评】本题考点涉及代词，非谓语动词，名词性从句，名词，时态，主谓一致，介词，副词，冠词以及 ⑦考查名词。句意：从那时起，我决定不吃零食，开始慢跑来减肥。lose weight固定短语，“减肥”， 因连词等多个知识点的考查，是一篇故事类阅读，覆盖面广，综合性强，难度较大，区分度高。 此把 weights改为weight。
2.【答案】 ①has后添加a ②their →its ③when →that ④understanding →understood ⑤Before ⑧考查状语从句。句意：因为我及时的改变体重，不久我就成功地塑造了我的新形象。“It was not + long →After ⑥删除up ⑦throw →threw ⑧attack →attacking ⑨because →why ⑩activity →activities before+主语+一般过去时”为固定句式“没多久就…”。因此本句中的after要改为before.
【解析】【分析】本文是一篇记叙文，记叙了有两千多年的历史的端午节，关于它的起源传说。 ⑨考查冠词。句意：直到那时，我才意识到养成好习惯的重要性。分析句子可知，句中的habit为可数名 ①考查冠词。history为可数名词，此处表示泛指“一个超过两千年历史”，故用不定冠词a，因此 has后添词。根据句意可知，此句指“养成一种好的习惯”，因此要在good habit前添加a。故在good habit前添加 a。 加a 。
⑩考查代词。句意：老实说，我习惯的改变对我来说意义重大，分析句意可知，此句中是指“我的(my)习 ②考查代词。修饰名词，指代The Dragon Boat Festival应用its，因此 their改为its。
惯而不是我们的（our）”，故把our改为my。
③考查连词。本句为表语从句，且从句中不缺少任何成分，故应用连接词tha，因此 when 改为that 。 【点评】本题考点涉及定语从句，介词，非谓语动词，形容词，副词，时态，名词，状语从句，冠词以及 ④考查时态。本句主语Qu Yuan与understand是被动关系，且动作发生在过去用一般过去时，故 代词等多个知识点的考查，是一篇故事类阅读，覆盖面广，综合性强，难度较大，区分度高。
understanding 改为understood 。
4.【答案】 ①grow→growth ②me后加of ③which→when ④have→had ⑤in→with ⑥去掉 ⑤考查连词。句意：在他死后，渔民划着自己的船去寻找他的尸体。根据语境此处 Before改为After。 was ⑦easy→easier ⑧but-→and ⑨learning→learn ⑩the→a
⑥考查介词。look for固定短语“寻找……”故删去up。
【解析】【分析】本文是一篇记叙文，作者记叙了自己的高中军事训练经历，作者认识到我们要学会把生 ⑦考查时态。本文讲述的是过去的事情，应用一般过去时，故 throw 改为threw。
活中的挑战看作是未来成功的垫脚石，并充分利用它们。
⑧考查非谓语动词。句意：人们把粽子扔进水里，希望避免鱼攻击他的身体。短语prevent (from)doing sth.“阻 ①考查名词。根据our可知，此处应使用名词，意为“我们的成长”。故grow改为growth。
止做某事”后跟-ing形式，故 attack 改为attacking。
②考查介词。句意：它们让我想起了我在高中时参加军训的日子。remind sb. of sth.固定短语，“使某人想 ⑨考查连词。句意：这就是为什么人们后来通过赛龙舟和吃粽子等活动来庆祝这个节日。固定句型that is 起某事”。故me后加of 。
why……“那是……的原因”，后跟结果，故 because 改为why。 ③考查定语从句。此处先行词是my days，关系词在从句中做时间状语，应使用关系副词when引导。故 ⑩考查名词。activity为可数名词，根据下文的活动不止一个，故应用复数形式，因此 activity 改为activities 。
which改为when。
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