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2014高考英语书面表达系列系列（44）及参考范文
第二节：写作
你叫李浩，你美国的笔友Jack在网上发现这样一幅漫画，他写信询问你这幅漫画的意思。请你用英文给Jack写封信，解释一下这幅漫画反映的社会现象。内容要点包括：
1．据报道70%的火锅店都向火锅里添加化学添加
剂；
2．火锅店这样做的目的是降低成本、节约时间，让火锅更诱人； 3．向火锅里添加化学物质对人体的危害； 4．如何解决这一危害大众健康的问题。 注意：
1．参考词汇：漫画cartoon;火锅hotpot;化学添加剂chemical addictives;食品安全
food safety
2．可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 3．词数100左右，信的开头、结尾和格式已给出。 Dear Jack,
I’m glad to hear from you
again. .
It is a great pity that I may not be able to treat you to a delicious hotpot when you come to visit me in China one day, isn’t it?
【参考答案】第二节： 写作（one possible version）
One possible version: Dear Jack,
I’m glad to hear from you again. The cartoon you came across shows a major concern about food safety in China. It is reported that over 70% of the hotpot restaurants are adding chemical additives to their hotpot to save time, reduce cost, and make the hotpot look more inviting. However, the effects of the chemical substances on
香喷喷的火锅 化学
添加剂
某火锅店
people’s health remains unknown and most people tend to believe that chemical addictives will do great harm to human body, even causing cancer in some cases. It is certain that strong measures should be taken to make sure hotpot is safe. Whoever adds harmful elements into the hotpot is a danger to society and should be severely punished. Otherwise, people in China may never have hotpot.
It is a great pity that I may not be able to treat you to a delicious hotpot when you come to visit me in China one day, isn’t it?
Yours, Li Hao
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2.最近，经常有新闻报道发生在青少年身上的交通事故，其场面令人触目惊心。因此，你们班同学对于青少年交通事故的原因及后果进行了一次讨论。请你根据以下内容提示，给某英语报社写一封信，描述讨论结果并针对如何减少该类型交通事故的发生提出你的建议。
原因 司机 精力不集中，超速行驶 酒后驾车 青少年 后果 不遵守交通规则 边走边看书、听音乐 青少年轻者耽误学业，重者丧失生命 让父母十分担心 建议 （自由发挥，至少两点） 注意：1.词数：130-170
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【参考范文】 2.Dear Editor,
I’m writing to tell you about a discussion our classmates had about the causes and effects of traffic accidents involving teenagers.
There is no doubt that both drivers and teenagers are to blame for such traffic accidents. On the one hand, drivers fail to concentrate on their driving or drive above the speed limit. Some drivers even drive after consuming alcohol. On the other hand, teenagers often disobey traffic rules, such as ignoring traffic lights. Also, many teenagers read books or listen to music while walking, which causes traffic accidents.
Some teenagers lose their lives and some are badly hurt and need treatment, which cost them plenty of study time due to traffic accidents. This causes parents to worry. Therefore, in order to reduce traffic accidents, I think the government should force drivers to be more responsible when driving. Furthermore, drivers who break traffic rules should be seriously published. At the same time, teenagers should learn more about road safety and always follow the traffic rules. *********************************************************结束
6. 为纪念汶川大地震三周年，某英文报发起关于灾区新貌的征文活动。请根据以下图片提示，以“Great Changes”为题，用英语写一篇短文应征。内容要点如下： 1.某中学灾后三年来的变化，如教学与活动场所，以及师生精神面貌等； 2.发生变化的原因； 3.你的感想。
注意：
1.短文标题与开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2.可根据图片提示适当发挥 3.词数：120左右 Great Changes
I am deeply impressed by the great changes that have taken place in the school over the past three years.
【参考范文】
6. Great Changes
I am deeply impressed by the great changes that have taken place in the school over the past three years.
On May 12, 2008, a severe earthquake destroyed almost everything in the school, leaving badly-damaged buildings. It is now, however, taking on a new look. Tall buildings have been put up, including classroom and laboratory buildings, and a library. There is also a newly-built standard playground. In the new environment, teachers and students are living happily and working hard. It is really amazing that the once-mined place has now been turned into a beautiful school, full of life.
Obviously, without the help of the whole society, there would be no new school today. It is love and concern that have brought about the great changes. Many hands make light work. We can work wonders if we unite as a family, caring for each other and helping those in need. Union is strength.