发布时间 : 星期三 文章2019届高考英语作文名师指路 模板07 求助信 Word版含解析更新完毕开始阅读9ec93d6eb9f67c1cfad6195f312b3169a451eaf9
07求助信
模板①
Dear ______ ,
I am writing to formally request to ______（请求的内容）.The reason for _____________is that_____________（给出原因）. I___________ , so I _____________（给出细节）.I would also like to request ___________（提出进一步的要求）. I am sorry for any inconvenience I have caused. Thank you for your attention to these requests. If you have any questions, do not hesitate to contact me at __________（电话号码）.
I look forward to a favorable reply. Yours sincerely, Li Ming
模板②
Dear________,
My name is _______________(自我介绍). I’m writing a letter to you to ask for some help. I have met difficulty in _______________(求助内容). First, I find ___________(困难1). Besides, ________(困难2). What’s more, __________(困难3).
Faced with so much difficulty, I have to ask you for some help. Would you like to ____________(委婉提出请求)？In the meanwhile, I beg you to (请求内容) so that ___________(请求目的). Also, I would like you to (请求内容).
I’m sure that I can make great progress in _____________(表达期待).
Yours, Li Hua
常用句型： （做某事有困难）
1.I have trouble in doing sth.
2.I find it extremely hard for me to do sth. 3.Doing sth is another terrible headache for me. 常见困难： 【生活方面】 与人相处
get along well with my classmates/ the new teacher / my parents. 和我的同学/新老师/父母相处 把握时间
arrange and make good use of my everyday time for valuable things. 安排和利用每天的时间去做有意义的事情 明确目标
know the purpose of my life and the destination of my future in order to passionately live a purpose-driven life everyday. 知道我生命的目的和未来的目标，以便每天充满激情地过着“目标驱动”的生活 【学习方面】 不懂语法
have trouble in mastering the advanced grammar rules and put them into use in my speaking and writing. 进步太慢
find myself making progress not as fast as before, which has been annoying me for a long time. 精力有限
can’t be passionate and energetic all day long so as to make every moment meaningful and splendid.
典例
假设你是李华，是一名高三学生。你的同班同学王强因患白血病(leukemia)而住院，目前已经花光了家里的所有积蓄，现在需要骨髓移植(bone marrow transplant)，需要20万元。请你帮他写一封求助信。要点如下：
1.对病人的简单介绍； 2.目前的困难； 3.希望得到捐助。
联系电话：白天5221600；晚上5221610。 注意：
1.词数100左右；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear friends,
I’m
very
sad
to
tell
you
that_________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours truly, Li Hua 【写作指导】
该写作根据要求可分为三部分来写，即先说明王强患病的情况，再简单介绍王强目前所处的困境，最后写出求助要求和帮助方式。可用第一人称写，时态可以一般现在时为主。 【范文赏析】 Dear friends,
I’m very sad to tell you that my classmate Wang Qiang, a Senior Three student, suddenly felt faint when he was preparing for the coming College Entrance Examination. He is suffering from a serious illness \three months and spent all the money his parents saved. His parents, both farmers, tried every means to save him.
Wang Qiang is a top student in our class, but he is in hospital now. He is in urgent need of a bone marrow transplant. However, his family is too poor to afford the expenses, which total 200,000 yuan. How can a poor family afford such high expenses? But time is life. We can’t wait to see such a sunshine boy lose his life.
So your help is badly needed. Let’s do what we can to save our fellow student. The life of a lovely boy is in your hand. Your love can save a life. You can contact 5221600 in the daytime and 5221610 at night. Yours truly, Li Hua 【范文亮点】
该范文结构合理，层次分明，语言表达地道，行文流畅。内容涵盖了所有的要点，运用了较多的高级语法结构和词汇，如which引导的非限制性定语从句，when引导的时间状语从句等。
Writting1
假如你是李华。最近，你与父母之间关系紧张， 甚至发生争吵。你决定给外国的笔友Charlie写一封信，向他求助。内容包括：
1.谈谈你目前遇到的问题；
2.针对如何改善与父母的关系向他求助。 注意：
1.词数100左右， 开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Charlie,