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错误的句子：The government should give a priority to social welfare, especially the healthcare
错误 1 give priority to 没有 a
正确的句子：The government should give priority to welfare services, especially the healthcare.
句子的结构：主语+ 及物动词+ 宾语还可以用名词性从句，定语从句扩充
some people suggest that the government should give priority to welfare services, especially the healthcare, which helps stop the disadvantaged population dying needlessly.
中文翻译：一些人认为政府重视社会福利，尤其是医疗服务，这会帮助阻止弱势群体无助地死去。
翻译 16：教育或许决定了人的工作机会。
错误的句子： Education may do hold the key to one’s job prospect. 错误：may 和 do 不能连用。
正确的句子：Education may hold the key to one’s job prospect. 句子结构：主语（education）+及物动词 hold)+宾语(the key) 可以使用状语从句
Education may hold the key to one’s job prospect, especially when people intend to find jobs in the hi-tech industry.
翻译 17：使用化石资源对环境会造成破坏。
错误的句子：Use fossil fuels can cause damage to the environmental problem . 错误：Use是动词，不能作为主语。
错误：cause damage to 已经表示出对环境的破坏，不需要再说 problem 正确的句子：The use of fossil fuels can cause damage to the environment. 句子结构：主语(use）+及物动词(can cause)+宾语(damage) 拓展的句子：可以使用状语从句
The use of fossil fuels can cause damage to the environment, possibly because it creates air pollution.
翻译 18：建造住宅楼有助于解决城市的拥挤问题。
错误句子：Building apartment blocks contribute to solve the crowed problem in cities
错误 1 building 是动名词，主谓不一致
错误 2 contribute to 后面要加名词，而不是动词原形错误 3 crowed problem 没有这个表达
正确的句子：Building apartment blocks helps solve overcrowding in cities. 句子结构：主语+及物动词(helps)+宾语(solve overcrowding,省略了to, 本来是不定式 to solve overcrowding)
拓展的句子：Building apartment blocks helps solve overcrowding in cities，because it can contain more people with limited space. 错误：contain more people 搭配不是很好
正确的句子：Apartment blocks, which make the most of land and space, help solve overcrowding in cities. 中文翻译：住宅楼由于其能最大限度地利用土地和空间，所以有助于解决城市的拥挤问题。
翻译 19：贫穷的人可以通过努力工作来提高社会地位
错误的句子：People at disadvantage are likely to improve their social status by working hard, studying hard.
错误 1 at disadvantage 没有这个表达
错误 2 working hard, studying hard 没有连词 正确的句子：People from disadvantaged backgrounds can improve their social status by working hard.
句子结构: 主语（people）+ 及物动词 (improve)+ 宾语 (status)，“from disadvantaged backgrounds”是 people 的定语 还可以用并列句扩展
People from disadvantaged backgrounds can improve their social status by working hard and this seems an arduous but rewarding process. 中文翻译：贫穷的人可以通过努力工作来提高社会地位，这看起来是一个辛苦但有效的过程。
翻译 20：因为全球化，人们需要和来自不同背景的人工作。
错误的句子：Because of the globalisation, people should work with others who comes from different backgrounds.
错误 1 the globalization 的 the 比较多余
错误 2who comes from 没有必要用定语从句错误 3 should 有点过分了，“必须”的意思
正确的句子：Because of globalisation, people need to work with those from diverse backgrounds. 注：这里的 those 就是其他人的意思，不能说 those people，这样会和主语重复。 句子结构: 主语(people)+ 及物动词（need）+ 宾语(to work)，“because of globalisation”介宾短语充当状语
翻译 21：我们需要采取措施去解决一些棘手的问题。
错误的句子：We must take measurement to tackle thorny problems. 错误 measurement 的意思是测量
正确的句子： We need to take action to solve some intractable problems. 句子结构：主语（we）+及物动词(need)+宾语(to take ?.) 翻译 22：媒体通过夸大受害者的伤痛去吸引观众。
错误的句子：Medias exaggerate the hurt of victims to attract public attentions. 错误 1：Media 本身就是复数。
错误 2：hurt 是动词，OF 前后要加名词。错误 3：attentions 不可数名词。 正确的句子：The media attract public attention by sensationalising victims’ suffering.
句子结构：主语（the media）+及物动词 (attracts)+宾语 (attention)；“by+ ?”方式状语
拓展的句子：The media attract public attention by sensationalising victims’ suffering, while ignore harmful consequences bring to them, such as their exposure to the public.
错误 1：while 是从属连词，后面不能直接加动词原形。 错误 2 ignore 和 bring 两个动词。 错误 3 them 指代不清楚
正确的句子：The media attracts public attention by sensationalising victims’ suffering, while ignoring harmful consequences to these individuals, such as their exposure to the public. 中文翻译：媒体通过夸大受害者的伤痛去吸引观众，而忽视对这些观众的有害结果，比如将他们在公众面前曝光。
翻译 23：基因工程让人们能培养新品种农作物
错误的句子：Genetic engineering allows people to nurture new species crops. 错误 1 species crops 语序有问题
正确的句子：Genetic engineering allows people to nurture crop varieties.
句子结构：主语+ 及物动词+ 宾语（people）+宾语补足语（to nurture?）
Genetic engineering allows people to nurture crop varieties that are resistant to drought， thereby improving land productivity.
中文：基因工程使人们能培育出抗旱的农作物品种，因此可以提高土地利用率。 翻译 24：经常运动使得人们保持健康的心态 错误的句子：Doing exercises regularly helps people maintain a healthy state of mind. 错误 1 Doing exercises 一般是不可数
正确的句子：Doing exercise regularly helps people maintain a healthy state of mind. 句子结构：主语+ 及物动词+ 宾语（people）+宾语补足语（to maintain?省略了 to）还可以用并列句扩充
Doing exercise regularly helps people maintain a healthy state of mind and makes it easier for them to cope with stress.
中文翻译：经常做运动帮助人们保持一个健康的心态，是他们更容易应对压力。 翻译 25：不健康的生活方式让人们处于生病的危险之中。
错误的句子： Unhealthy lifestyle is likely to make people at risk of illness.
错误 1： make somebody do something 或者是 make somebody +形容词是更常见的用法。错误 2：lifestyle 可数名词，要加冠词，或者复数 正确的句子：An unhealthy lifestyle may put people at risk of illness.
句子结构：主语（An unhealthy lifestyle）+及物动词（put）+宾语（people）+宾语补足语（at risk of illness）
翻译 26：奖学金可以鼓励更多的学生去学习研究生课程。
错误的句子： Scholarship could be regarded as something to inspire more students to take postgraduate curriculum.
错误 1 scholarship 可数名词，应该有复数或者冠词 错误 2 regarded as something 太过罗嗦
错误 3 curriculum 不是 course 的替换词，curriculum 的意思是课程大纲 正确的Government grants could encourage more students to take postgraduate courses. 句子结构：主语 (government grants)+及物动词(encourage)+宾语(students)+宾语补足语(to take postgraduate courses)
翻译 27：社区改造为罪犯提供了获得职业技能的机会
错误的句子：Replacing the long sentence by working for the locals provides offenders with transferable skills.
错误 1 主语很别扭，两个东西没有替换性
正确的句子：Community service provides offenders with opportunities to acquire transferable skills.
句子结构：主语+ 及物动词+ 宾语（offenders）+宾语补足语（with opportunities to?）还可以用并列句扩充
Community service provides offenders with opportunities to acquire transferable skills and gives them a flying start when they are released. 中文翻译：社区服务给犯人提供获得实用技能的机会，给他们好的起点当他们被释放后。
翻译 28：法律应该将醉驾变成刑事犯罪。
错误的句子：The government should introduce a law which is drunk driving a criminal offence.
错误定语从句还原是“a law is drunk driving”显然不对。中国学生有个误区，就是一定要写个从句，才能加分。
正确的句子：Legislation should make drink driving a criminal offence.
句子结构：主语（legislation）+及物动词(make)+宾语(drink driving)+宾语补足语(a criminal offence)
翻译 29：乡村地区给人们提供机会去远离现代生活的压力和噪音。
错误的句子：rural area provides people with opportunity to escape pressure and noises of modern life.
错误 1：rural area 可数名词，没有冠词，或者复数。 错误 2：opportunity 在这里用复数比较好。
正确的句子：Rural areas provide people with opportunities to escape pressure and noises of modern life.
句子结构：主语(rural areas)+及物动词(provide) +宾语(people)+宾语补足语(with opportunities)
拓展的句子： Rural area is beneficial to people's fitness, because it provides people with opportunities to escape pressure and noises of modern life.
错误：rural area 可数名词，没有冠词，或者复数。两个句子的主语都一样，还不如用分词
正确的句子：Rural areas are beneficial to people's health, providing people with opportunities to escape pressure and noises of modern life. 中文翻译：乡村地区对人们的健康有益，因为它给人们提供机会去远离现代生活的压力和噪音。 翻译 30：人口老龄化促使国家去提高法定退休年龄（statutory retirement age）。 错误的句子：Compulsory retirement age will be abolished, and the reason is attributed to population aging and urban. 错误 1：retirement age 是可数名词
错误 2：reason is attributed to 这个搭配不好
正确的句子：The ageing population has prompted countries to raise the statutory retirement age.
句子结构：主语(ageing population)+及物动词(prompt)+宾语(countries)+宾语补足语(to raise?) 拓展的句子：The ageing population leads to a shortage of skillful workers, a problem which has promote countries to raise the statutory retirement age.
错误：应该是 skilled workers. Skillful 表示人们做某事的时候所展示的技艺娴熟 正确的句子：The ageing population leads to a shortage of highly skilled workers, a