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第八周 高级词汇与高级句式的润色升级
一、使用高级词汇
写作时，“高级词汇”如能运用贴切自然，哪怕整篇文章只用上一两个，也会为你的作文增添色彩。
1．标新立异
写作时要恰当得体地使用一些蕴含感情色彩，别人有可能想不到的词汇，恰当地求新求异。
We all have the same chance.
→We all possess the same chance (opportunity)． We have a lot of homework to do at the weekend. →We have endless homework to do at the weekend. 2．短语优先
多使用词组、习语来代替一些单词，以增加文采。 I can no longer bear the way he speaks to us. →I can no longer put up with the way he speaks to us. The boy realized the danger and began to run away. →The boy was aware of the danger and began to run away. 3．避免重复
尽量避免过多地使用某一个单词，必要时选择使用其他恰当的同义词或词组来代替。 I like reading while my brother likes watching football matches. →I like reading while my brother enjoys watching football matches. 二、使用高级句式，让句子靓起来 1．恰当使用被动语态
Above all, we must do something to stop pollution. →Above all, something must be done to stop pollution. 2．使用强调句
The accident happened the other day. →The accident did happen the other day.
He didn't come to the party because he was very busy.
→It was because he was very busy that he didn't come to the party. 3．使用倒装句
We can only improve our English in this way. →Only in this way can we improve our English.
We don't know its value until we lose health. →Not until we lose health do we know its value. 4．使用省略句
Although they were faced with many problems, they didn't lose heart. →Although faced with many problems, they didn't lose heart. 5．使用感叹句
We had a very good time with the peasants that day. →What a good time we had with the peasants that day! 6．使用with复合结构
Because there was too much noise, I couldn't go on studying. →With the noise going on, I couldn't go on studying. 7．使用虚拟语气
I didn't take his advice, so I failed in the exam.
→If I had taken his advice, I wouldn't have failed in the exam. It's time for us to take measures to protect the wild animals. →It's high time that we took measures to protect the wild animals.
Ⅰ.用较高级词汇代替画波浪线部分的词或短语
1．The bookshop is in a building on Franco Street.____________ 答案：lies
2．I have decided to study English harder this term.____________ 答案：made up my mind
3．I don't know how to enlarge my vocabulary.____________ 答案：have no idea
4．We'll try our best to develop the traditional friendship between us.____________ 答案：spare no efforts; promote
5．We've built a new experiment building beside the old one and we've also built a library where the old playground used to be.____________
答案：set up
Ⅱ.用较高级句式转换下列句子
1．I realized the importance of English when I entered senior high school.(强调句) It_was_when_I_entered_senior_high_school_that_I_realized_the_importance_of_English. 2．We can live a happy life only by this means.(倒装) Only_by_this_means_can_we_live_a_happy_life. 3．He fell asleep. The lights were still on.(with复合结构)
He_fell_asleep_with_the_lights_still_on. 4．If it isn't well organized, the meeting will be a failure.(省略句) If_not_well_organized,_the_meeting_will_be_a_failure. 5．They carried out a survey among 260 students.(被动语态) A_survey_was_carried_out_among_260_students. 6．We love our motherland very much.(感叹句) How_much_we_love_our_motherland! 7．Because I was ill that day, I didn't take part in the sports meeting.(虚拟语气) I_was_ill_that_day._Otherwise,_I_would_have_taken_part_in_the_sports_meeting. 8．They didn't realize the importance of environment protecting until all the fish in the river died out.(倒装句或强调句)
Not_until_all_the_fish_in_the_river_died_out_did_they_realize_the_importance_of_environment_protecting. 或
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It_was_not_until_all_the_fish_in_the_river_died_out_that_they_realized_the_importance_of_environment_protecting. Ⅲ.翻译句子
1．(2012·福建书面表达)只有通过这种方式，我们才能生活在更加美丽舒适的环境中。(倒装句)
Only_in_this_way_can_we_live_in_more_comfortable_and_beautiful_surroundings. 2．(2012·福建书面表达)公园里空气清新，喷泉美丽，阳光灿烂并且伴有鸟儿在歌唱。(with复合结构)
The_park_was_full_of_freshness_and_beauty_of_spring,_with_the_sun_shining_and_birds_singing. 3．(2012·江苏书面表达)在昨天下午的篮球比赛中，苏华和李江在抢球时撞在了一起。(分词作伴随状语)
During_the_basketball_game_yesterday_afternoon,_Su_Hua_and_Li_Jiang_bumped_into_each_other,_trying_to_catch_the_ball. 4．(2012·陕西书面表达)经验告诉我，不是你得到的东西而是你如何利用它决定了你是怎样的一个人。(被动语态；强调句)
My_experience_tells_me_that_it_is_not_what_you_are_given_but_how_you_make_use_of_it_that_determines_who_you_are. 5．他说英语说得如此清晰，以至于大家都能听得懂。(倒装句)
So_clearly_does_he_speak_English_that_he_can_always_make_himself_understood_by_everyone. 6．是我们做出决定的时候了。(虚拟语气)
It_is_high_time_that_we_made_a_decision. 7．由于开车太快，他在事故中受了伤。(强调句)
It_was_because_he_was_driving_too_fast_that_he_got_injured_in_the_accident. 8．如果人们被说服了吃更多的水果和蔬菜，那么死于心脏病的人数将大大减少。(被动语态)
The_number_of_deaths_from_heart_disease_will_be_reduced_greatly_if_people_are_persuaded_to_eat_more_fruit_and_vegetables.
第九周 句子间、段落间的衔接与过渡
连接(过渡)性词语的使用是语言连贯性得以实现的最常用手段。在句与句之间，段与段之间恰当地使用一些承上启下的连接(过渡)性词语是非常必要的。中学阶段应该掌握的连接(过渡)性词语可以归纳如下：
1．表示起始关系的过渡性词语
above all, first of all, to begin with, according to, as you know/as is known, as is shown in等。
First of all, I think it important to make more friends abroad. 首先，我认为一个人在国外多交朋友是很重要的。
As is shown in the picture, a tree is knocked down by the strong wind, while the grass stays as it is.
正如图画所示，树被大风刮倒了，而小草依然在那里。 2．表示时间顺序的过渡性词语
first, then, later, in the end, finally, at last, after that, since then, immediately, suddenly, soon等。
I had a bad cold last week. First, I had a running nose, but I did not take it seriously. Then I began to cough. After that, I had a fever and felt weak. Finally, I was sent to hospital and had to lie in bed for three days.
上周我得了重感冒，首先是流鼻涕，但我并未当回事，然后开始咳嗽，后来感到发烧而且没力气，最后我被送进医院，不得不在床上躺了三天。
3．表示空间顺序的过渡性词语
on the right/left, on one side of, on the other side of, at the top/foot/end of, in the middle of, in front of, at the back of等。
In front of the flat stands a tall tree, and at the back of it flows a river. 在房前有一棵大树，房后有一条小河在流淌。