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注意:1.词数80词左右，开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数 2.可适当增加细节，使行文流畅。
参考词汇:共享单车:shared bikes Dear Lisa,
I’m glad to hear that you’re so interested in our “Four New”Inventions”______________________ Yours Li Hua
【答案】Dear Lisa,
I’m glad to hear that you’re so interested in our “Four New Inventions” Let me tell you about them.They are high-speed railways,electronic payments,shared bicycles and online shopping.We travel by high-speed railways.They are very quick.We use electronic payments when we use online shopping,When we want to go somewhere by bike,we use shared bicycles.We use our mobile phone to unlock the shared bicycle.It is convenient and cheap.There is no pollution and oil cost.We can also keep healthy when we ride it.There will be the Science Festival in our school.It will show all kinds of models that students make.I hope you will come to visit them. Yours Li Hua 【解析】 【详解】
这篇作文要求我们根据提示来介绍中国的新四大发明，题目中给出了具体的写作的内容，我们应将这些内容用正确的英语表达出来。首先应注意在短文中要包括题目中给出的所有信息，不能遗漏要点，并注意表达的层次和条理。其次要注意使用正确的时态和人称，通过分析可知，这篇短文应使用一般现在时态，谓语动词用原形，特别要注意谓语动词形式要变化，这是一个写作的难点。最后要注意英语的表达习惯，英语句式与汉语在语序和词性上的使用是不同的，要注意不能逐词翻译，写汉语式的英语。应从句子整体考虑，使用恰当的词汇和句型来表达，语法规范。还应使用一些较好的句型或者短语，增强文章的表现力。
19．（·陕西师大附中中考模拟）书面表达
假设不久前你们学校为贫困地区的孩子们筹款举办了一次慈善行活动。请以“Walk for children in poor areas”为题，为某中学生英文报写一篇报道，内容要点如下： 1. 目的：为贫困地区的孩子们筹款 2. 时间：10月23日，星期六 3. 路径： 学校——市中心
4. 简况：学生把自己分成四人一组，出发前计划好了一切，步行很艰辛，但活动过程中大家互相帮助，互相支持。最终在许多人的帮助下，筹的善款5万多元。 5. 感受：每个人都很累，但都很高兴，因为….
注意：1. 报道必须把包括所给内容要点，要求语句通顺，意思连贯； 2. 第5要点的内容须用至少2句话展开合理想象，作适当发挥；
3. 词数80个左右。（开头已给出，不计入总词数） Walk for children in poor areas
Not long ago, our school organized a charity walk to raise money for children in poor areas.__________
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【答案】It was on Saturday, 23 rd October. We walked from the school to the centre of the city. Before the walk, we grouped ourselves into a team of four and planned everything well. It was a hard （tough） work. But during the walk, we supported and helped each other. With the help of many peop le, we raised over （more than） 50,000 yuan in the end. We all felt tired, but we were very happy. Because it was a meaningful experience and it was an excellent chance to learn team spirit. 【解析】 【详解】
本篇文章属于报道类，时态应该用一般过去式为主。 重点词汇：
（1）walk from …… to……从……步行到……；（2）With the help of many people在许多人的帮助下； （3）over （more than）超过；（4）in the end在最后；（5）raise money筹款。 重点句型：
Before the walk, we grouped ourselves into a team of four and planned everything well. 步行之前，我们把自己分成四组，并计划好一切。Group……into….把……划分……。
Because it was a meaningful experience and it was an excellent chance to learn team spirit. 因为这是一次有意义的经历，也是学习团队精神的好机会。a meaningful experience一次有意义的经历；an excellent chance极好的机会。
20．（·北京中考模拟）假如你是李华，你们学校准备组织学生本周五去北京世园会参观。你打算邀请外教 Peter参加。请用英语写一封电子邮件，告诉他集合的时间和地点，在那里可以做什么，以及参观时需要准备什么。 提示词语： school gate, nature, culture, food and drink 提示问题： ●When and where are you going to meet? ●What are you going to do there?
●What do you advise Peter to prepare for the visit? Dear Pete, How is it going?
I am writing to invite you to visit Beijing International Horticulture Exposition in
Yanqing.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I'm looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua
【答案】 Dear Peter， How is it going?
I am writing to invite you to visit Beijing International Horticulture Exposition. We will meet at the school gate at 7:00 a.m. this Friday. Then we will go to Beijing International Horticulture Exposition together. We can do a lot of things there. We can not only enjoy the special and beautiful plants but also learn different cultures in various indoor or outdoor shows. We plan to stay there for a whole day. You'd better wear a pair of comfortable sports shoes and take some food and drinks with you.
I'm looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua 【解析】 【详解】
1. 题干解读：这是一篇给材料作文，属于应用文写作。本文已经给出了主要写作要点，动笔前要先认真阅读要点，写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上；提示的问题就是写作的基本方向，然后围绕要点适当发挥即可。
2. 例文点评：文章采取邮件格式，时态以一般将来时态为主。语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，语言准确，语意连贯，表达清楚，具有逻辑性。
3. 高分亮点：
短语：school gate；invite sb. to do；a lot of；plan to do。 句型：not only…but also；You'd better …；I'm looking forward to…。