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Unban Greenbelt Construction
30000 25000 20000 15000 10000 5000 8819.26 况，请描述其变化
2）请说明发生这些变化的原因 3）你认为这样的变化是否合理，为什么
1 According to the chart, it is clear that the national expenses on Urban Greenbelt
Construction in China from 1998 to 2002 changed a lot. 2 The chart shows in 1998, 8819.23 million RMB was spent on Urban Greenbelt Construction, while by the year 2002, the national expenses on Urban Construction in China had risen to over 26709.57 million RMB. （描述图表）
3 Many reasons contribute to this change. 4 To begin with, the natural environment has become worse than before and the climate has also been affected. 5 Moreover, the government has realized that they can no longer ignore the deterioration of the environment and decided to take some measures. 6 In addition, the public are paying more and more attention to environmental problems. 7 As a result, more and more attention and money are paid to the Urban Greenbelt Construction.
（说明原因）
8 As to me, those changes are reasonable and welcome. 9 First of all, if the government does not pay attention tot the changes of environment, they might never spend much money on it. 10 Besides, these changes demonstrate that the government has realized that we have one environment only; if it is ruined, we would be nowhere. 11 To conclude, I have the confidence to believe the environment around us will become better and better. （总结观点）
示范作文
1）有些大学允许学生自由选择某些课程的任课教师 2）学生选择教师时所考虑的因素
3）学生自选任课教师的益处和可能产生的问题
Students Selecting Their Lecturers
1 Students’ selecting their lecturers has been brought into focus. 2 Nowadays, many universities entitle their students to choose freely teachers for courses, which is welcomed by most students. 3 In addition, teachers
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have also paid much attention to it since it involves their career fate. （描述现象）
4 The factors which will influence the students’ choosing a teacher are varied. 5 Among all these factors, a teacher’s professional knowledge and ability play a very important role. 6 That is a precondition for a good teacher since students choose his course to learn knowledge. 7 Moreover, quite a few students think teaching methods and skills are essential. 8 Besides, a teacher’s humor sense is also an important factor many students will consider.
（说明原因）
9 As far as I am concerned, free choosing of teachers has its disadvantages as well as its advantages. 10 For one thing, it can provide a good chance for teacher to prove his ability, and give students more initiative in learning. 11 For another, however, since it is a free choice, few excellent teachers will become the focus of most students’ choosing, which will lead to an unreasonable class size and influence teaching effect seriously. 12 In a word, both students and teachers should take this matter into serious consideration.
Income Sources between Chinese Students and American Students
Sources of income Parents Percentage of total income American students Chinese students 异的原因 3）说明自己的观点
Income Sources between Chinese Students and American Students
1 From the table, we clearly learn that there is a great difference between the income sources of Chinese students and those of American students, which has aroused common concern. 2 What impresses us most is Chinese students earn only 5% of their money from part-time jobs and 5% from fellowship or scholarship while American students 35% and 15%.
（描述图表段）
3 There are many reasons accounting for this difference. 4 To begin with, different social and family values lead to the difference. 5 That is to say, Chinese students tend to form a habit of asking for money from their parents while American students are likely to form more of a sense of economic independence. 6 Moreover, developed America provides more part-time jobs than China. 7 In addition, Chinese universities do not provide sufficient scholarship while it is quite a different story in American. 8 As a result, the difference follows up.
（说明原因段）
9 As to me, this difference concerning the income sources is indicating something necessary to do. 10 For one thing, Chinese students have to realize the necessity of self-dependence. 11 For another, more opportunities should be provided for them to hold part-time jobs. 12 To conclude, it is high time that Chinese students went out of the ivory tower to become more independent.
（总结观点段）
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1）根据上表，简要描述中国学生和美国学生收入来源的不同
2）请分析导致这种差
（总结观点）
The Adaptation of the Classics
1）近来，许多经典名著被改写成各种版本以供大众娱乐 2）这种现象产生的原因
3）经典名著被改写可能产生的问题
The Adaptation of the Classics
1 Recently many classics are being adapted in many ways, which has aroused great concern. 2 In those adapted works, all plots are changed and all characters become somewhat watered clown. 3 In addition, some familiar characters expressing the good wishes of our common people have been distorted. （描述现象段） 4 There are many reasons accounting for this phenomenon. 5 Among all these reasons, readers’ preference plays a very important role. 6 That is a precondition for the market of the adaptation of the classics. 7 What is more, the concept of creativity is prevailing in every aspect. 8 In addition, the improved living standard enables people to pursue and enjoy more choices of entertainments including the adaptations of the classics.
（说明原因段）
9 As far as I am concerned, the adaptation of the classics does more harm than good. 10 For one thing, since the classical literature is the representation of the outstanding art of our nation, the act of adapting may ruin its charm. 11 For another, those adapted works will affect children’s outlook on life, who are the future of the nation and always believe what is in the books is the truth. 12 In a word, the real classics should be presented on the bookshelves to lead people to appreciate the real art. （总结观点）
对比选择型
基本框架
提出观点段
主题句---- 扩展句一（观点一）---扩展句二（观点二）
论证观点段一
扩展句一（观点一的理由一）---- 扩展句二（观点一的理由二）----- 主题句
论证观点段二
扩展句一（观点二的理由一）---- 扩展句二（观点二的理由二）----- 主题句
总结观点段
主题句--- 扩展句一（“我”的理由一）--- 扩展句二（“我”的理由二）--- 结尾句
提出观点段
主题句---- 扩展句一（观点一）---扩展句二（理由一）---扩展句三（理由二）
对比论证段
主题句（观点二）----扩展句一（理由一）---扩展句二（理由二）
总结观点段
主题句--- 扩展句一（“我”的理由一）--- 扩展句二（“我”的理由二）--- 结尾句
结构模板
1 When it comes to 事物/问题，there is no complete agreement among people. 2 Some people take it for granted that 一种观点. 3 However, others maintain that 另一种观点. 4 Those people who hold the former opinion believe 观点一的理由一. 5 In addition, 观点一的理由二. 6 Therefore, 总结观点一.
7 However, still others advocate the latter opinion because they hold 观点二的理由一. 8 Besides, they argue that 观点二的理由二. 9 So, 总结观点二.
10 Weighing up these two arguments, “我”的看法. 11 For one thing, 个人看法的依据一. 12 For another, 个人看法的依据二. 13 Taking above-mentioned factors into consideration, we/ I may reasonably conclude that 重申观点.
1 When asked about / When it comes to 事物/问题，different people will offer different opinions. 2 Some people take it for granted that 观点一. 3 In their opinion, 观点一的理由一. 4 Besides, 观点一的理由二. 5 However，others hold 观点二. 6 They maintain观点二的理由一. 7 And观点二的理由二.
8 Weighing up these two arguments, “我”的观点. 9 For one thing/On one hand, 理由一. 10 For another/ On the other hand, 理由二.11 For instance，举例说明理由二. 12 Therefore, as stated above, 总结全文.
示范作文
Should the University Campus Be Open to Tourists?
1) 名校校园正成为旅游新热点
2) 校园是否应对游客开放，人们看法不同 3) 我认为…
1 When it comes to whether the university campus should be open to tourists, as more and more people list famous universities as tourist attractions，there is no complete agreement among people. 2 Some people take it for granted that university campus should embrace tourists across the country. 3 However, others maintain that the university campus should be closed to tourists.
（提出观点段）
4 Those people who hold the former opinion believe that refusing tourists is contradicting universities’ proclaimed spirit of openness. 5 In addition, they also argue that no university has the right to reject tax payers to enter its grounds because it is public land.
（对比论证段一）
6 However, still others advocate the latter opinion because they hold that too many tourists will add a burden to the security department of the university.7 Besides, they argue that these tourists will destroy the quiet environment and influence students’ normal study.8 So, it is unadvisable to admit tourists to visit university campus freely.
（对比论证段二）
9 Weighing up these two arguments, I prefer the former opinion. 10 For one thing, it can enable high school students to get more information about the university and have better preparation for their choosing to get into the university. 11 For another, a university should be an open place and impart the spirit of openness to its students. 12 Taking above-mentioned factors into consideration, I may reasonably conclude that the university campus should welcome all tourists.
（总结观点段）